You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

Dear Sir / Madam,

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I am

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writing in regards to

utilizing

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utilising

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the weekend at one of your

hotel

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hotels

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, by

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the name Seaside

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, so

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that I can make appropriate planning for our

short term

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short-term

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staycation and reduce any inconvenience that might happen

due to

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inadequate preparation.

To begin

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with, I saw positive reviews about your restaurant and

together with

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my family, we would like to spend five days there. We are supposed to arrive on Friday, 13th January

2026

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2026,

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at 7.00pm and leave on the evening of 17th January.

Also

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, I will appreciate getting a double room because we are 3 adults and 2 kids.

Additionally

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, we request

for

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apply

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weekend charges so that we can be sure about our budget.

Finally

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, on the social

medial

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platform

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platform,

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I saw that you have various indoor and outdoor functions. We would like to get the details

as well as

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whether

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there will be any extra cost incurred or

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if it

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will be all inclusive. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours

Faithfully

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faithfully

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, Jane.

janenjeru6

Jan 11, 2026

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Structure

Break your letter into clear paragraphs, each with one main idea.

Grammar

Use a standard greeting and closing, and check spelling.

Clarity

Be clear about the number of rooms and who stays in each room.

Clarity

State dates clearly and keep words simple.

Style

Keep a polite and formal tone.

Strength

Polite tone throughout.

Strength

You give all the key points (dates, room type, cost, activities).

Strength

Shows you want to plan and avoid a problem.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accommodation
Arrival and departure
Sea view
Family suite
Cost estimate
Activities and amenities
Water sports
Cultural sites
Natural attractions
Places of interest
Confirmation of booking
Warm regards

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