The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK by four different modes of transport (road, water, rail and pipeline) between 1974 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph illustrates the quantities of
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transported in the UK by road, water, rail and pipeline between 1974 and 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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road
transport
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accounted for the largest amount of
goods
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throughout the period,
while
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pipeline
transport
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showed a steady increase.
By contrast
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, water and rail
transport
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followed more fluctuating trends. In detail, the amount of
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carried by road rose gradually from around 70
million
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tonnes
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in 1974 to nearly 100
million
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tonnes
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by 2002, despite some minor fluctuations. Rail
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,
however
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, declined slightly in the early years and
then
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fell more noticeably during the mid-1990s before recovering towards the end. Meanwhile, water
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increased significantly in the first half of the period, reaching approximately 60
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tonnes
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, after which it fluctuated and dropped slightly before rising again.
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,
goods
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transported by pipeline rose steadily from about 5
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tonnes
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to just over 20
million
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tonnes
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by the end of the period.

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