The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the difference between oil

producing

Replace the word

production

show examples

and

using

Replace the word

use

show examples

in China

during

Change preposition

over

show examples

24 years.

Overall

Linking Words

, we can see that at the

befinning

Correct your spelling

beginning

of the graph, oil production was higher

Linking Words

then

Use the right word

than

show examples

the consumption. The

using

Replace the word

usage

show examples

was the same for 8 years,

thereafter

Linking Words

there was a sharp rise

compering

Verb problem

compared

show examples

to production

which

Punctuation problem

, which

show examples

was remain

Wrong verb form

remained

show examples

steadly

Correct your spelling

steady

without changes. Only after 1994, oil production grew

gradualy

Correct your spelling

gradually

, but it

still was

Correct word order

was still

show examples

much lower than

consuption

Correct your spelling

consumption

. Using each year was growing higher and higher

untill

Correct your spelling

until

riched

Verb problem

apply

show examples

it peak.

lenochkapopovich

Jan 27, 2026

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

83 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

oil production
oil consumption
gradual increase
surpass
overtake
reliance on imports
disparity
steady rise
growing gap
significant

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge. However, despite this, most schools still teach academic subjects such as history or social studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Although most job descriptions require vocational skills or specialized knowledge, there is a paradox that academic subjects such as history and social studies get more attention compared to practical career experience. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.
8
band
You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. With a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter : Explain where you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you do not want this development
I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention to the plan for the extension of St. Alison Airport which can affect our society in numerous ways.
8
band
Some people believe that most crime is a result of circumstances, e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others, however, believe most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of criminals in many countries, even if their national economy is growing. However, people hold different views about the factors contributing to crimes.
7
band
The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree? (phòng bệnh hơn chữa bệnh)
There are those who argue that prevention is more indispensable than cure, which implies that taking measures to avert health issues and diseases is significantly superior to treating them once they have occurred. This essay will explore the reasons why, in my opinion, treatment should be prioritized in government funding.
7
band
mrs barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to mrs bareett. in your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available
I am writing in connection with the advertisement which was asked about someone in order to assist you for a few hours on a daily basis between 21 June and 28 June. I am a pharmacy student at White College and I wish a part-time job that suits my personality. Then, I can help you in different matters including tenting to plants, looking after pets and paying for different factors.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge. However, despite this, most schools still teach academic subjects such as history or social studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. With a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter : Explain where you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you do not want this development

Some people believe that most crime is a result of circumstances, e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others, however, believe most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree? (phòng bệnh hơn chữa bệnh)