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The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014

The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014
The pie chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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 the
precentage
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percentage
 of volunteers by
orgnisation
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organisation
 between 2008and 2014.In
siex typ
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six types
 of methods ( environment ,art, education ,health care ,sport , and others ).
Overall
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,
its
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 clear that volunteers in environmental and education show the highest
presectage
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percentage
 in
tow
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two
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 years (2008-2014 ),
while
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 art and health care
ware
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were
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 the lowest proportion.
To begin
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 , in
the
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apply
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2008 year

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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