The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014

The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014
The pie chart
precents
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presents
proportion
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the proportion
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of volunteers by
organization
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organisation
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, from 2008 and 2014.
Overall
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, these two
by
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apply
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charts illustrate
sixe taybs
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six types
of volunteers .
the
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The
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environmental volunteers
is
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are
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the
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a
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big portion in 2008,which is29%,
similrtly
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similarly

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