The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided pie chart illustrates graduates from Brighton University who joined different sectors.

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, it can be clearly seen from the pie graph we note that a large

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of graduates are in the services industries , the proportion is 33.0%.

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with, as we menited, the large

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of services in comparison with sport received a

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of 0.1%

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As other specialisations

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received a low

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, they are Transportation and warehousing received 7.8% , science technology 7.3% , and sport 0,1% charity 0,3% , and civil service, 5.6% , and other 2.8. In conclusion, the sectors that constituted a large

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enrolled in them service industries33.0% ,

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industry 16.3% , politics and government 12.1% ,

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14.7% in a total of 66.1%

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the graduates of the University of Brughton .