this is the task The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the proportions of
graduates
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from Brighton University in 2019 who entered different employment
sectors
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.
Overall
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, the largest percentage of
graduates
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worked in service industries,
while
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sport and charity attracted the smallest proportions. Most
sectors
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accounted for less than 20% of employment. In detail, 33% of
graduates
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entered service industries, making it the most popular sector. Manufacturing was the second largest employer at 16.3%, followed by education at 14.7%. Politics and government accounted for 12.1% of
graduates
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By contrast
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, several
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employed fewer than 10% of
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. Transportation and warehousing represented 7.8%,
while
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science and technology made up 7.3%. Civil service accounted for 5.6%. Very small proportions worked in sport (0.1%) and charity (0.3%). The remaining 2.8% were employed in other
sectors
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, sectors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportions" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • employment sectors
  • graduates
  • significant
  • percentage
  • trend
  • compare
  • most chosen
  • least popular
  • distribution
  • highlight
  • graduate destinations
  • notable
  • cohesive understanding
  • employment trends
  • pie chart
  • bar chart
  • overview
  • chosen career paths
  • sector popularity
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