You ordered a new chequebook from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the chequebook, how much longer you will have to wait, and ask the manager what action he/she will take about this matter.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction

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a service, which was taken by me at your branch. Since I have placed an order for a new chequebook, I have not received it yet. On Monday, at around 8:15

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I personally visited the branch located at the Mall Road in Bathinda and the chequebook was applied for on my behalf by one of your employees. It has now been a couple of weeks since I made a request for it. As I have several financial obligations, the delay is causing me considerable inconvenience.

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, could you please let me know when I will get it? Will I need to visit your branch

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will I get it by post? I would appreciate it if you

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me what actions will be taken regarding

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matter.

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, could you check the expected delivery date? I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kaur.

rupindersamrow222

Mar 11, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts, but one part is not fully clear. You ask when you will get it, but you do not say how much longer you can wait in a clear way.

task response

Task response: Add one clear line like: I can wait only three more days because I need it for my bills.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter is easy to follow and the order is good.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Some lines can link better. Use words like also, so, and therefore in a simple way.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: One sentence is not natural: the chequebook was applied for on my behalf. Write: one of your staff helped me order the chequebook.

task response

Task response: You give the time, day, and place of the order.

task response

Task response: You make your problem clear and ask the manager to act.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main point.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The greeting and closing fit a formal letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

160 words

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