"The line graph shows car production in Japan and the USA from 2010 to 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant."

The line graph

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car production

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and the

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from 2010 to 2019.\

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, we can see the lines is fluctuates, in the first age the

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contour was decreasing morover the varnish lin was stabilizing

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after one day the

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lins has increase and gloss crease has rise

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edge has at the peak of rising and stain boundary has fluctuate for 5 century ago moerover the

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configuration still increase for 5 century ago but

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bar is fell and the stain borderline was stabilizing and it ended up to the two lines stabilizing in the

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boundary was incrasing morethen glaze boundary

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