The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different veriables are measured in percentages

The data displays natality, mortality and the
scothish
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Scottish
population growth proportions from 1940 to 2020.
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,
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it
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appears that New borns
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and death
rate
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both had
an important
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a significant
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decrease from the
fourty's
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1940s
to the sixty's, Birth
rate
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remains above
death
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the death
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rate
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until approximately
2017
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2017,
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where it' the other way around.
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, the highest population increase is recorded in the
middle fifty's
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mid-fifties
,
then
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it keeps declining until turning negative in the early 2000s. Birth and death
proportion
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proportions
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have been reduced by half
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a twenty-year period
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respectively form 2,5% to around 1% and 1,5% to near 0,5% from 1940 to 1960. For the next sixty years,
birth
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the birth
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rate
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slightly
decrease
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decreases
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to 0,5%
while
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mortality remains
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approximately
the same until 2010, when it starts to rise again and overtake natality after 2015.
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, the population growth
rate
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has tripled from 1945 to 1955 to reach its top-
rate
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of 1,5%
this
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year. Afterwards, the trend has been steadily declining to zero in 2003.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • death rate
  • population growth rate
  • percentage
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • stabilize
  • demographic
  • interrelate
  • historical events
  • social policies
  • economic conditions
  • healthcare advancements
  • variable
  • measured
  • decade
  • significant
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