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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and the projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data illustrates the
amount
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number
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 of people living in four states of the world as of 2003, 2025 and
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 the estimation for 2050.
Overall
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, the most significant trend is the increase in population in every country
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besides
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 Italy. The dominant figure in all periods of time belongs to Indonesia,
second
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the second
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 highest value in 2025 is reportedly obtained by
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the Republic
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 of Korea,
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then goes
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followed by
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 Argentina, and Italy is the minority.
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 with, the number of Indonesian residents is experiencing a stark growth, rising from 238
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millions of
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 people in 2003 to 274
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millions of
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 people in 2025.
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, the
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number
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 of citizens is projected to reach 312
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 in 2050, which is a remarkable gain.
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, Argentina
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 shows a giant incline, starting with 34
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millions
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 and having 48
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 in 2025, and the future results are expected to be even higher (62 million), which is almost twice as much as in 2003.
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, the Korean numbers are stable, slightly rising from 54 million in 2003 to 47 million in 2025, and
th
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they
 are supposed to stay at the same level in 2050.
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, the Italian population shows a constant decline, bringing the country from the second largest position to the rank of
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the least
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 populated state among
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the considered
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 ones.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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