The graphs below show the percentage of world's forests and the percentage of world's timber production in different regions of the world.

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The graphs illustrate the share of forests around the world and the amount of timber produced in various regions of the world.
Overall
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, percentages in Russia in both graphs were dominant,
whereas
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Europe had the lowest percentages. Observing the graph about the world's forests in 2010, Russia and South
America
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were the record holders among other continents, both accounting for more than 20%(24,2% and 26,5%). Proportions in North
America
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were slightly lower
in contrast
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to these two, constituting 21,9%.
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, Asia and Oceania made up only a small fraction.
On the other hand
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, South Africa was relatively higher, accounting for 13,2%. In terms of timber production, Russia had a significant margin among all the continents. In 2010, it made up 37,5%.
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, Europe had the least share of proportion in production, making up only 9,2%. South
America
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and North
America
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shared similar percentages; the former was 11,2% , and the latter was 12,8%. Surprisingly, South
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and Asia/Oceania
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constituted almost the same proportions,
while
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one represented 15%, the other one accounted for 14,3%.

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