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the line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant

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The line graphs compare the value of Australia's
exports
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 to and
imports
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 from
China
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,
Japan
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 and the United States between 2002 and 2008, measured in billions of Australian
dollars
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.
Overall
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, trade with the US remained relatively stable throughout the period.
Imports
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 from
China
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 increased markedly and eventually surpassed
exports
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,
while
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imports
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 from
Japan
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 declined steadily.
Exports
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 to
Japan
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 fluctuated considerably, reaching a peak before falling back towards their initial level. In terms of
exports
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, Australia's
exports
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 to
China
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 decreased slightly from about 42
billion
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dollars
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 in 2002 to approximately 38
billion
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 in 2008.
Exports
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 to
Japan
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 rose marginally to around 42
billion
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 in 2005 before surging to roughly 65
billion
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 and
then
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 falling to about 50
billion
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 by the end of the period. Meanwhile,
exports
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 to the US remained largely unchanged at around 40
billion
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dollars
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. Regarding
imports
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, the figure for
China
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 fell from approximately 32
billion
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dollars
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 to 20
billion
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 in 2005 before rebounding sharply to around 45
billion
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 by 2008.
By contrast
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,
imports
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 from
Japan
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 declined gradually from about 35
billion
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dollars
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 to 30
billion
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 and
then
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 remained stable.
Imports
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 from the US showed only modest growth, rising from roughly 22
billion
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dollars
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 in 2002 to about 26
billion
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 in 2008.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, imports, china, japan, dollars, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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