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The graphs show the smoking status and the percentage of daily smokers by age groups between 1990 and 2010 in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 60 Tobacco smoking status, people aged 14 and over 40 ercent 30 —Daily Smoker -Ex-smoker •• Never smoked 10 1990 40 1995 2000 2005 2010 Daily tobacco smokers, by age percent 25 20 15 10 —18-24 -25-49 •. 50+ 1990 1995 2000 2005 E2 2010

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The graphs show the smoking status and the percentage of daily smokers by age groups between 1990 and 2010 in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 60 Tobacco smoking status, people aged 14 and over 40 ercent 30 —Daily Smoker -Ex-smoker •• Never smoked 10 1990 40 1995 2000 2005 2010 Daily tobacco smokers, by age percent 25 20 15 10 —18-24 -25-49 •. 50+ 1990 1995 2000 2005 E2 2010
The line graphs illustrate the proportion of people aged 14 and over, who were
smokers
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, ex-
smokers
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 and never smoked, and the fraction of everyday
smokers
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 by age
groups
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: 18 to 24, 24 to 49, and 50+, from 1990 to 2010 in Australia.
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, upon inspection of the first graph, it is apparent that the only group to exhibit a downward trajectory in its size was those who smoked daily,
while
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 the rest saw an increase. From the second graph, the percentage of people aged 50 and older remained unchanged throughout the period,
whereas
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 the other
groups
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 experienced significant drops.
To begin
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, let us analyse the first graph, which pertains to smoking status in detail. Those who never smoked consistently predominated the cohort, and saw a modest rise; by 2010, 1 in 2 people aged 14 and older had never smoked.
Similarly
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, ex-
smokers
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 increased their share of the population from just above 20% in 1990 to approximately 30% in 2020.
However
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,
smokers
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 were more than 20% at the start of the period,
although
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 they dropped to almost 10% by 2010. Looking at the chart that depicts daily
smokers
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 by varying age
groups
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. In 1990, the group aged 18 to 24 accounted for 35% of the population,
while
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 those between the ages of 25 and 49 held more than 30%. The two
groups
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 experienced a steady decrease to under 15% and just below 20%, respectively. The fraction of the remaining studied group of daily
smokers
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 remained at around 20% to the end of the period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words smokers, groups with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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