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The diagrams below shows thee coasttal village of seavilla in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisions where relevent.

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The diagram illustrates the
costal
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 village of Seaville between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 there are significant changes in
this
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 village,
while
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 some areas have
sill
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still
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 remained unchanged. In the north-west section of the map, woodland
have
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has
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 been demolished
and
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, and
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 a golf course area has been
constrated
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constructed
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. In the south of
golf
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the golf
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 course, Marsh and holiday cottages had been replaced by permanent houses. But
,
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apply
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 Hotels have remained untouched.
In
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On
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 the right of
north-south
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the north-south
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road
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,
Tea
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the tea
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 room and sand dunes have been replaced by
hotel
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a hotel
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 and
restaurent
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a restaurant
.
In
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On
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 the left
of
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bank of
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river
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the river
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,
retirement
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a retirement
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 village connected with the main
road
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 and a boat club had been introduced. In the east, a new
road
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 has been
construted
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constructed
 connecting to the main
road
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 with
an
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a
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 flyover above
river
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the river
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,
east
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the east
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 bank
have
Verb problem
apply
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has remained unchanged
and
Punctuation problem
, and
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 Holiday cottages
had
Wrong verb form
have
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 been
construted
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constructed
 beside the east bank connecting to the side
road
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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