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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the informa

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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the informa
The bar charts
compares
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compare
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 the percentage of Australian
men
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 and
women
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 who held five different types of
post school qualification
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post-school qualifications
 in 1999.
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,
men
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 accounted for higher proportions of people with skilled vocational
dimploma, posgraduate
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diplomas, postgraduate diplomas,
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diploma
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 and master's degrees,
while
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woman
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women
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 were more likely to hold undergraduate
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diploma
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diplomas
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 and bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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. In 1999, the largest gender difference was found in skilled vocational diplomas. Approximately 90% of people with
this
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 qualification were
men
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, compared with only 10 who
women
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.
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,
men
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 represented around 70% of postgraduate
diploma
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 holders,
whereas
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women
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acccounted
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accounted
 for just 30%.
In contrast
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,
women
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 dominated the undergraduate
diploma
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 category, making up approximately 70% of qualification holders, compared with 30% for
men
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.
Women
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also
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 held a slightly higher proportion of bachelor's degrees, at around 55%,
while
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men
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 accounted for approximately 45%. The proportion of
men
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 with master's degrees was higher than that of
women
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, at approximately 60% and 40%, respectively.
This
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 indicates that
men
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 were more strongly represented in several higher-level qualifications

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, diploma with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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