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It is generallybelieved that the internet is an excellent of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find informatio. Discuss Both views and give your opinion

Modern life has become easier and the people of the world have to thanks to the immense contribution of the internet technology to communication and information sharing. There is no doubt that internet has made our life become easier and more convenient. We can use internet to communicate with people around the world, doing business by using internet, make new friend and know different cultures, searching information, studying and etc.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

-front page Republic of Turkey Istanbul University Law Faculty Bachelor's Degree Diploma No 45756 Date of Graduation 27.06.2016 ID No 36155160030 OZAN ÖNER completed the four-year law education of the faculty of law and was entitled to take this diploma with a bachelor's degree in order to benefit from all the rights and powers granted by the law prof. dr. adem sözüer (deputy dean) prof. dr. mahmut ak (rector) -back page student no 0201120758 name and surname ozan oner mother's name zöhre father's name mustafa birthplace and date kadıköy/04.07.1992 registered province sivas/zara date of issue 05.01.2017 issuing person aysel yılmaz head of student affairs necla aslan
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Some people think that one should plan detailed activities for their leisure time, others disagree with that. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that nowadays people are spending time on leisure activities to re-energize and to relax from regular occupational tasks. Although planning leisure time is preferred by some people, there are others who firmly believe that impromptu activities are the best way to utilize spare time. This essay makes comparison of the two and chooses the most preferred option.
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With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages.

No, I believe the disadvantages outweighs the advantages, people becoming dependent on fast food is never a good thing if we factor in the cost that fast food has on ones health and money. Regular intake of it might result in obesity. Moreover, it might also cause the severe health problems like hypertension, diabetes and so on. Eating habits and enjoying fast food as main meals to accommodate the price of fast foods is more expensive,
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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

As the character is concerned, we can tell in some places if the wearer of clothes is a follower of fashion. another aspect of the dress is whether the clothes look clean and ironed or grubby and very casual. this might tell us how much concerned they are about to be smart. however, the way someone dresses can also be misleading at times. there are some people which wear clothes that seems very unusual and strange but often they are just following fashion and are not unusual or strange people in their personalities at all.
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

NOW A DAYS. THE COMPETTITIONS HAVEV INCREASED IN COMPARISON TO THE DECADE AGO. HENCE, CERTAIN FOLKS ARGUE THAT OFFSPRINGS SHOULD BE INSPIRED TO TAKE PART IN THE COMPETITIVE ACTIVITIES SUCH ASC I ACADEMIC FIELD, OR SPORTS. WHERE AS REST OF THE INDIVIDUAL THINK THAT JUVENILES SHOULD LEARN ABOUT THE COMPROMIZING THING RATHER THAN COMPETE WITH OTHERS IN ORDER TO BE A RESPECTFUL CITIZEN OF THE NATION. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY PEOPLE THINKS ABOUT THE ABOVE IDEAS AND SECONDLY, GIVES MY OPINION IN TO SUPPORT BOTH NOTIONS WITH RELATED EXPLANATION AND EXAMPLES.
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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Family plays a very prominent role in our life, since we are born. There is a lot of changes occured in a modern family, if we compare it to old family life style. This essay will discuss why the changes are postive but why the impact at times are also negative.
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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternatives ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The environmental problems are progressively popping up on the surface of the public discussion. A part of society states that certain species of the biosphere might soon be extinct of the globe and that this is the main problem of humanity, while others think that there are more severe environmental issues. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why extinction of any species have to be taken into account as the main environmental problem.
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Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion including relevant examples.

Whether to give money as gift to teenagers is becoming increasingly controversial topic. While for some giving monetary gifts to young people is preferred choice but for others it is not a wise decision. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth and explain why choosing cash as gift to youngsters is not best option.
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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?

To begin with, it should be acknowledged that as time has progressed the conventional methods of teaching have been overdriven by the more innovative methods. Although, some teachers still abide by the older methods. Most of the teachers have now switched to the more modern method of teaching. However, there are pros and cons for these new measures which will be discussed at length in this essay.
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Some people say that shops should sell food made locally whenever possible than selling imported foods. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion I will agree in some terms, basically because what most people look nowadays is to impulse and increase local economy and this can just be succesfull if we as citizens support our local brands and products above imported ones. For example: Buying local products, consuming local brands, recommend to other people or friends these products so our local economy can grow.
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The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare people for work in the future.

Agile or co-working workplaces are said to be the future of worksplaces. The world of work is changing rapidly and hence, employees cannot depend on the same work or conditions for lifetime. In this passage we will discuss the possible causes and I would also suggest ways to prepare the people for work in future.
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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the recent times, proliferation of attacks caused by gun in many nations because of people has the licence to keep them in their households. In this essay, I will argue, why, the usage of the guns among common people should have been restricted.
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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

For many years, university degrees has been been considered to be of paramount if one must succeed in the the society, as many feel it is the only way to get employment in a reputable organization. However, i consider university degrees as a necessity to guarantee a good job.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

The graph shows the underground passengers number in london city from 6:00am to 10:00 pm. As it is observed the highest number of people using underground is between 6:00 am to 8:00 am.
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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing nowadays the government have taken some major at the global level but they only get a few solution why is it so how can this problem be solved

Pollution is directly affected by the climate. Plastics are made influence of environment. So it is banned in many Nations. Though people who responsible for it, They have no idea what type of mistake they have done. However, They made more rules and regulation for the circumstances. For example, Uses of plastic are banned in the market so people just have to use polythene which are not harmful for the environment, but countries owner has to create a major law for reducing pollution and try to control the climate by developing trees.
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Fewer and Fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons, is this positive or negative development?

Nowadays, because of growing technology and the rise of computers, less people undertake handwritten work with pen, pencil or brush. The computer is playing a vital role in replacing orthodox methods of writing. In my opinion, it is a positive development as a lot of trees are axed to produce pencils as well as chemicals are used in large scale to prepare ink for pens. All of these contribute an ecological threat to our environment.
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In some countries, old people are more valued while in some young people are more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every country in the world has their distinct culture and thought process to portray. In some countries, few believe that older people are valued, while few perceive that young lads are given more weightage. In my opinion, it completely depends on how modernised a country is with regards to their culture and technology. Countries that have rational approach are more keen on youths ideologies, while the ones which are orthodox in nature display respect for old people.
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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Government uses its budget for different things such as art, public services, wellfare etc. Some people argue that government should only invest its money in public services instead. I personally think that the insvestments should be made in art and social services equally, and I would like to eleborate my thoughts in this essay with examples about this very controversial topic.
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All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars whould replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

First of all I can say I'm totally agreed with this idea. I can explain why my ideas in this way easily.
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