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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Part of the population believe, that celebrites deserve to live their lives in privacy. The other part of the population share an opinion, that being chased by papparazi is just a price for being well-known. In the following paragraphs I would like to discuss both sides of the argument.
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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Paramedics treat everyone equally they say but do they follow this in real life as well? However better medical facilities have resulted in improving the life expectancy rate but it has its own disadvantages which overshadow the advantages.
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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

There has been an increase in the demand for clothes already been wore and dumped by people among the youngsters. The main reason behind this phenomenon is the cheap price at which these products are available, and I believe this is a positive trend as this boosts the business of small-size retailers.
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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV, video games, and other types of entertainment for children’s leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think this problem can be tackled?

it is well-known for us the globalization and technical process around the world have their pros and cons. Nowadays children are allowed to use the gadgets along with their parents, moreover to play the same games or watching the same films. Unfortunately, due to the immaturity of the infant psyche and mind, it is impossible for them to divide reality against play and accordingly cruelty occasionally ferociousness fits the consciousness.
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The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer

The issue of imposing very serious official limitations on cigarette usage in public places has been always a matter of controversy among doctors and human right's proponents. I am completely aware of the destructive effects of smoking on human health; Therefore, I totally agree with imposing this prohibition. Indeed, strict laws and regulations should be defined to fight its destructive health consequences
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The increase in food production is mostly due to fertilizers and better machinery. Yet, some think that it harms human health and communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of chemical fertilizers and state-of-the-art equipment is used for producing food and their substantial drawbacks have been always a matter of controversy among people. I completely agree that adding chemical compounds and using agricultural machines to improve the growth may result in some health problems for human beings and irreversible damage to the environment.
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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

It is argued that the increase in tourism in the last 50 years caused drawbacks to impact local inhabitants and the environment. On the other hand, others claim that the increase in tourism benefits the economy. In my opinion, I think the increase in tourism is good for the economy.
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Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Designed a milk powder plant of capacity 100MTPD involving its process flow diagram, calculated mass flow rate and energy consumption of various units including fluidized bed dryer, multi-effect evaporator, and spray dryer. Process optimization and mechanical designing of the dryer were done to decrease the economy and increase profits. Cost estimation for the setup and HAZOP study analysis .
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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

all parents want to see their children succeed in their life;but some parents want to see their children succeed in study and others want to develop their child skills in all kinds of skills like sports , music etc.both perspectives are discussed in the ensuing paragraph before my opinion is given in the last paragraph.
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Why do you want to be a participant of this summit?

The reason why I would like to be a part of this summit is that I want to discuss global problems with like-minded people. This summit conference allow people all over the world to talk about the current problems and during the conference the people will have chance to find solutions to the human issues.
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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why this is the case? What can be done about this problem?

The bar chart illustrates the population surge in the world's largest metropolitan regions in particular years while the table highlights the top five populated cities in 1950 and 2010. It is measured in millinos. Additionally, the last line graph gives information about rural and urbal population in 20 years from 1980 to 2010.
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•Some people believe that all the company decisions should be taken by the managers whereas others think it is better to include employees while making decisions. Discuss both the points and give your opinion.

There are split opinions about decision making in the company for a better future of the empire. Some people believe that higher authorities take the final call for the company improvements whereas another group of thinkers support that every individual who works for the organisation should include in the taking decision.
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The tendency of news media to focus on problems and emergencies rather than good news has a negative effect on individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern times, thanks to our smartphones and the 24/7 media cycle, we seem to be constantly bombarded by the news and, unfortunately, most of it is about disasters, attacks and tragedies. It has been argued that this negative focus within the media has a detrimental effect not only on individuals but on society as a whole. Personally, I strongly agree.
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In many countries people are living in a throw away society where things are used for a short time and throw away. what are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to

The given pie charts display amounts of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar eaten in meals and snacks by an average person In the USA. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, the highest amount of sodium and saturated fat is present in dinner, while the maximum amount of added sugar is present in snacks. To begin with, the greatest percentage of sodium and saturated fat is consumed in dinner.
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the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.

The diagram illustrates more data about the amount of mobile phones and landlines in more countries. Units are measured with the percentage
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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.s Discuss the advantages of both and give your opinion.

Dear DianneThanks for your email and follow-up.I had registered my two sons for the summer school in persian classes. Both my sons are native Farsi speakers. They can read and write at the level they are supposed to be at their age. The teachers are good but the problem is that kids are not leveled up according to their knowledge in persian. I assumed the kids have been distributed only by their age. For example, my older son, who is going to be in grade 5 next September, had classmates who couldn't even speak and understand persian. Therefore, I don't believe that the teacher would be able to do any magic in a class with a huge difference in her student's literacy in persian . I can not expect my sons to wait in an online class with not a single student at their level.
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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

Hello, last year I could not enroll to the college due to the virus and other reasons. Is there an option to attend classes online this year or will it be completely face-to-face?
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In some countries, governments provide payments for unemployed people. How does this impact people? Is this a positive or negative development?

Unemployment is a major problem that every nation face time to time. But the question here comes is how a country tackle its jobless people. Some nations provide a help through providing funds to unemployed individual's bank account. Therefore, this scheme has influenced people in a positive way.
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The death penalty is best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

The two line charts compare the changes of total ownership of housekeeping appliances and the number of hours of housework in a particular country during one hundred years.
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Using social media as Facebook, Twitter is replacing face-to-communication in this century. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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