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In some educational systems, children are required to study one or more foreign languages. In others, foreign language study is not a requirement. What are the potential benefits of foreign language study? Do you think foreign language study is an important part of education?

Nowadays, it is important to know a foreign language. In my home country, only private schools teach a foreign language. I think the students who attend private schools in Brazil will be much more prepared for life. For instance, many companies would hire only employees that know a foreign language, such as English or Spanish.
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CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

Over the globe it is argued that a child must follow his or her parent's directions because they have their best interest at heart but this I completely disagree with due to that most of the parent's notions are usually outdated and myopic as well.
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Global warming is one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions? (approximately 250 words)

In this essay, let me discuss global warming issues in the contemporary world. All the countries have been trying to maintain the climatic conditions for several years. It is connected with environmental changes in the 20th century.
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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believed it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the increasing problem that the world is facing would be global warming. The contributing factors would be the rising pollution from several nations. While some indivials opine that we should address solutions globally, I believe that providing initiatives within countries would prove productive.
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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, big tech giants and small companies are following a trend as working from home. In other words, Employees who have their own gadgets can work remotely without appearing at the office. Consequently, this new adoption of workspace has more pros over cons.
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Some school has a restriction of use phone at school

Love them or loath them in this modern society almost every each individual has a phone even students. In most schools around the world, has certain rules about the use of their phone in school to maintain to focus on their study.
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In the past, people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

The small community promotes a better neighbourhood. Because, in a little area, is easy to get acquainted with the inhabitants and maintain communication with them. Consequently, the neighbours are being together to share emotions and offer their hands in case of difficulties. That means, living in such area provides mental supports. For example, in my village, a poor young boy has got the expensive treatment for having colon cancer with the help of the local community as they strongly felt for the boy of their society.
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In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Today is an era of advanced technology and instituitions are facing misbehaviour of students on a large scale. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons of misbehaviour and possible solutions to solve this problem.
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”Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.

These days a large number of people focus on increasing wealth rather then doing physical exercises. As a result, a huge number of people diagnosed with diseases and pay a hefty amount on treatments. I firmly agree with the statement prevention measures should be taken. However, scientists should always be doing research for treatments, could save millions of lives.
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Use of internet for shopping and information – Advantages and disadvantages

shopping online save time and energy it is a faster way to buy things at a discounted price.
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We live in a world of technology these days. While internet brings with it clear advantages, the problem in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

Technology has changed human lifestyle and way things works around him in very different ways. out of all the other major components, the internet is one of the major blessings that technology has given but there is a debate out there that the lack of control and security cuts out its pros. I will shed some light on what I think about it in the following paragraph.
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Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a healthy and long life .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The diagram illustartes Olive Oil manufacturing steps.
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You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.

I am writing a letter to draw your attention concerning the communication received from the bank. My name is Swami and Account No-1234. I have been holding my saving account since past 03 years althogh i have recently moved to other city.
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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

Education plays an important role in the development of people as well as the nation. Education is a fundamental right of citizens and everyone should have equal access to education despite of their monetary status. I agree with the view as it leads to the development of the nation and provides equal opportunity to build a successful career. I will elaborate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead, do you agree or disagree?

The monetary support government provides to the Art industry, most especially in music and movies has been frowned upon by many. Furthermore, they believe that government should rather put its revenue into better usage by serving its citizens. I opine that government's focus should be more in improving the lives of members of its community. The reasons for my opinion would be discussed below.
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As well as making money, businesses have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

In this highly competitive world, apart from earning money organizations are also required to be socially responsible. I agree to this and will substantiate my opinion with relevant examples in the consequent paragraphs.
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Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society.what do you think are the main causes of unemployment and solutions

The increasing of the unemployment rate is becoming one of more serious social issues. A massive workers' movement from rural to urban areas might be the main cause of that problem, along with technological development. Government measures that aim to minimize centralization jobs in cities, and the promotion of handmade tasks could solve or mitigate unemployment.
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(opinion one) A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, (opposing opinion) while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people do not feel that they are personally responsible to others and environment.
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More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

Now days, larger part of crowd is starting focussing on eating healthy and excercising regularly. While, there are few who still requires to adopt these habits by making them aware about detrimental impacts, a unhealthy food could have in their lives. In this essay, I will elucidate the reasons behind of acceptance healthy diet and staying fit as well as measures which can help lazy crowd to follow.
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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

According to some scientists everyone one will be speaking the same language in the near future. In my opinion, this prediction will come true, it will have positive and negative ramifications.
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