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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?

People would argue that painting and drawings are crucial for student's development and they should be added the school system as a complusory subject. I completely argee with the point of view and in the essay i will support my opinion
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Nowadays, people spending more time away from their homes because they spend longer in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

People now use to spend more time in their offices and due to this they are not able to spend enough time at home. In this essay we will discuss positives of this, which can be promotion chances and more learning, and negatives of this such as not enough time to family and becoming less social.
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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Medias play an important role in the society, its main responsibilty is communicate the news and events to the common public. In the current period the number of medias has increased that includes print, telecast, radios, and social medias. It's noticed that the focus of these medias are diverted only towords the issues and problems, and are paying less attention to the positive development of the society and some people thinks its harmful to the people and society.
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Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reason . It is good or bad?

The World is going through a difficult stage due to pandemic that caused lockdown throughout the world. Many lives have paid for the same. Down the year everyone was in a hurry to gather money and basic Necessity of life. To spend time at home rather than going outside is helpful in achieving safety
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We live in a world of technology these days . While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problem in terms control and security of information outweighs the advantages.

Now everything connected by internet. Internet plays more important role in our life nowadays. We can watch movies, listen to music, find information which we research and also we can buy everything that we want. Also people can talk each other by it easily and they can put theirs photos or informations to social networks. So from this point we can call internet already has become half of our life. Although problem in terms control and security of information outweighs the advantages. It can be the biggest problem but i think we need to internet more. We can not shutoff the internet while our demand become more and more to the internet. Followed by i think internet needs to the society
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Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others prefer group lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The conventional education approach of teaching one on forty students is regarded as old-fashioned. The educational experts developed two new teaching modes, individual private lessons and small group lessons. However, not everyone suitable for one singular learning approach.
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the growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issue involved. some people think that the best way to deal with this problem to introduce more physical addtion lession in n the school curriculum .to what extent do you agree or diagree?

IN the recent year,there are surge in number of owerweight people.although may people belive that overweight people goes to the health care clinic to advice how to reduce the weight it is good. but i think in revese manner and agrre to this statsment.my inclination giving ensuing paragraph.
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Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In my opinion, having a music class plays very important role in student's life, while growing up and learning new things practising music gives them concentarion, some times it leads to a career path too. Music breaks the connection of individual to the material so that they are able to concentarate.
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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As we know internet has become a daily nessesity in our life, it's has changed a lot in our socialize. There are been many positive and negative which i am going to explain some of them in bellow.
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The below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below?

The chart gives information about some consumer product in four european countries. There are six goods on the chart
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Some people believe that children's time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Two opinion about museum operations
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people? Why might this be the case? Is it a positive or negative situation?

In most of nations, the benefit of owning an accommodation is more significant for some people than renting a home. I would like to point out that having an own apartment is a positive impact on human life.
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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Social networking Site gives you both positive and negative impact to the society and individual.at the positive side, social media aware people to the world and they can also connect to the World and knows good things and work of people in the society.as on negative side they lose the value of reality they are living in the imaginary world where they can just thinking of something without doing nothing in his life.ao the use of social media has to be restricted by perants or the person yourself.you have to balance between the way of use of social networking sites.and give some to ti yourself to thinking about your original Passion which far away from this harsh imaginary world.
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More and more workers work overtime and did less exercise. What is your opinion?

I knwo it is very tough to ouve in the world where everyone are going towards a money fame and luxurious life style.but they should start and thinking about a happy life as well. Because After all u can get money but your health and your life is tge most important thing compare to anything. if you live happy only then you cam enjoy your moneyand wealthy life style otherwise everything which you have is nothing. so we can understand that as an elder man and main working man of the family you have to work hard and more to Survive his family in this digital growing world.but if your health is good so you can work to longer instead of die at short age. so do your work happily without taking too much burden.
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the happy valley shopping center has changed alot between 1982 and 2012. Do you agree with that statement?

The given maps illustrate the different of happy valley shopping center between 1982 and 2012
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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Although the advent of technology has positively influenced many sectors including agriculture, it has not decreased poverty across the globe. In this essay I will determine the causes of increasing poverty and the ways in which this issue can be dealt with.
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In many countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction . What measures could be taken ro prevent this .

Reducing quality of air and water is a major concern, is ubiquitously because it causes detrimental effects on human body. Several countries are encountering this issues and it is increasing dramatically with each passing year. It happens only because of polution that is mainly generated by industries but construction works. In this essay I shall highlight preventive steps such as inculcating awareness in city dwellers towards waryness of environment and inact stringent laws for companies and work associated with building of infrastructures before embarking to a reasoned conclusion.
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changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK.

The graph shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK. All four modern technologies shows in general upward trends.As CD player the percentage of access in homes in the UK rose gradually from 45% to 80-95% until 2006/07.After 2006/07 the percentage in the UK dropped slightly. Likewise, the income for other three modern technologies.There was sharp climb in Internet that starts from 1998/99.Furthermore, the Mobile phone also went up, but fluctuated wildly.Likewise, there was sharp climb when in 2002/03 appeared DVD player, that percentage of homes that use DVD player went up to 80% and caught up with Mobile phone and Internet.After success, CD player dropped slightly compare with Mobile, DVD and Internet. It is noticeable that the income for CD player is decreased in the 2006/07 for the other three modern technologies in homes in the UK.
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Schools should do more to teach students about their health and wellbeing. Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, the world is changing by leaps and bounds. It is undeniable that, there is a lot of information about clinical conditions and illnesses available freely on the internet. So, some people believe that it is a good thing people would not have to go to the doctors for their cures, whereas the others argue that people should concern doctors about their illnesses. I totally agree with the latter view. It has more pros outweigh cons.
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In many countries people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

All of we live in a period that accumulates materials used ephemerally. The human mind wanders unstablly all of his life. He comprehends enough than other mammals to differentiate or contrast between material and immortal . In such a society, throwaway substances are used or heavily depended for conducting benifitted tasks.
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