IELTS Writing Samples Band 1. Page 78

IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitats an some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

There is no doubt that poaching and forest destruction have impacted animal population negatively. This essay will explore why I believe that preventing these species from exitinction is of utmost importance and also porpose some methods to mitigate this issue.

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completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. on the other hand other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skills is more important . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people state that the best education is crucial to get a job whilst others consider that better job experiences and communication help in it. I believe both are important because education help to learn basic knowledge to perform the work and experiences and soft skills help to ease the actual work.

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It is true that whilst many people use their public parks, this space could be used for other purposes, such as building houses for young people or developing a business area to create jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I believe that the public parks should be maintained because the public parks is a impaortant portion to live in the city for human life.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The highly controversial issues today relates to whether government should consume more money to improve the public transportation or the better use of this money is to develop more railway track in order to provide flexible transportation to population. In this essay, I am going to shed lights on the bothe view and give my own view.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages.

The technology and security system,which has installed in the museum to protect the vintage and antique item. So charging for admission to museums is advantageous. As the salary which has been paid to the staff and the maintenance of the museum is all afforded by this only.

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Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some governments prefer to spend on the welfare of sports and sportsmen so that they perform well in the global sports event. Some people consider that governments are wasting funds on unuseful things, they should first focus on common men benefits. I strongly agree with the later idea that authorities should invest in the things that are beneficial for common men because common people are the spinal cord of a nation's growth and economic welfare.

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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The given table illustrates student financial resources in the United Kingdom over a span of ten years. (For a university professor, write apaper explaining the details shown below.)

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Tourism industry has been flourishing since last decad, and it has became the main income sector for numerous nations. Although travelling provides monetary benefits and create job opportunities in host countries yet the problems like pollution associated with it can not be ignored. However, I believe that the overall impact of tourism is positive.

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Some people think that video games are advantageous while others believe video games are harmful to the people who play them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

thinking power, better hand at computers, problem solving, team management,

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The job market today is very competitive and it is best to choose a career or field of study early in order to get a good job later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Finding employment in the current job market is very difficult and competitive, choosing a field of study or career path early makes finding work easier later in life. In my opinion, I agree that making the decision on a career path at a younger age would be beneficial for future employment.

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Every household should have a government-imposed limit on the amount of rubbish it can throw away. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

it is often argued that there should be governing body forced limit on garbage that one family can put aside. And I believe that this is a good idea to limit the problems related to trash and I will discuss some facts below.

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The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few issues have drawn as much scholarly attention as traffic issues in the cities, especially in the past few years. A few people believe that by discouraging people moving from countryside to cities, we can avoid the traffic issues, while others argue that it is not a solution. I am of the opinion that stopping people migrating to cities from contryside will solve the transport problems.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Although it is sometimes thought that environmental issues ought to be solved on a national scale, other people argue that dealing with them globally is much better. My own view is that people can tackle environmental problems on a global scale more effectively than nationally.

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buying things online is becoming more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Trend of buying products online is rapidly burgeoning gloablly. Although there are a few demerits, merits of buying things online outweigh this because online products are cheap and avalaible with different options.

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Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

It is a debatable issue that whether school uniforms play an positive or negative role in student's life. The prespective for its benefits state that it promots equality as well as encourage concentration on studies, however the opinion against it argue uniform discourage children as they lose control over their clothes. I agree to the former view, but I would present both sides of argument in this essay.

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in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Although technology upgrades are applied in agriculture, number of people dying due to starvation worldwide. This is happending because population is rapidly burgeoning; nevertheless, land is limited. This problem can be curbed with awareness among the people.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising ?

Global warming has become an enormous issue globally. There are few man-made factors which are deteriorating this issue. Increased number of automobiles and deforestation are the major reasons for rising in temperature.

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Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society?

"You need to study a lot if you opt for science". This is the notion that a lot of students have while they are selecting which subjects they want to study further. This is one of the major reasons why a lot of students around the world do not choose to study science subjects at the university.

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Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many folk assume that it is necessary to add the syllabus of physical education in all educational institute, where as others think to be more focus on university subjects which is more better then physical education. In my opinion, physical education should be include in all institues. We will discuss both views in detail.

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Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment.

Illegal activities are increasing day by day and it can be witnessed by the present.According to one school of thought,should be one type of punishment for all prisoners.This essay will snoop up the pros and cons and suggest Possible solution.

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