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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Now a days we can see dramatic changes in family structure and roles. This essay will provide the information about the changes that taken place in morden families and outweigh the prons and cons.
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SOME YOUNG PEOPLE ARE LEAVING IN CITIES AND TOWNS LEAVING ONLY OLD PEOPLE IN THE COUNTRYSIDE. wHTAS PROBLEMS ARE CAUSED BY THIS ISSUE . WHAT CAN BE DONE TO SOLVE THIS SITUATION?

the young population is leaving the rural areas for large settlements like cities and town. In my essay , I am going to present the situation of elderly people that remain in the rural life after young people leave for better opportunities and give some solutions to this issue.
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Money Can Make Life Easier And More Comfortable. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Sadly it is the most important thing in life.I find it hard for a person to live with 0 income, because without it your worth nothing, the more cash you have the more things u can get and do.
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

It is obvious in current days the average weight of people is increasing.Many things has changed over the decades that led to this situation.
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Social media has many positive uses, but there have been some negative consequences to it as well. Identify a problem caused by social media and describe the solutions you would propose to address this problem.

Social media has many positive uses,it can give you news in a fast way, also it can connect people whos living abroad, it can also give you all kind of informations, it has made the world smaller.
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In many countries people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

Many people are experiencing growth population which demands more and more materials and the rise of technology is making these materials more easy to get the more u get those things the more u use them for a short time
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The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities caused problems im both palces. In your oponion, what is the reason for this problem? How can it be solved?

n my opinion, i agree that the young today spend a large amout of their leisure in shopping centres because it can bring negative influences on the youths and the society.
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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The past 10 years have seen a dramatic increase in obesity of children in most of the socities. Some would argue that these situation had been created by governments while other argue that it happend by their parents. I agree with latter one. This essay will firstly contend that government how can make trouble to rose children weight and secondly argue that their family have important influences on their obesity.
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When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of new country. Other prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these chocies which one do you prefer?

In salad days of millennium, because of globalization people migrant to another country for various options. After migration some people
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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more comfortable, other people say that life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

In this time computer are our life.In my view, computers are very popular. I can't imagine life without a computer because, it make everything easier.
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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not to build new homes there. What is your opinion

Opinions are divided whether to fulfill basic need of people it is recommended to build new home on countryside. However, some averse with this suggestion as they are in favour of protecting natural environment. Here in this case as far as my view is concerned than I would like to say that roof is utmost important to any person with little bit of planning, we can construct them in rular area without causing much damage.
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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

There are 5 countries that has the percentage of national consumer expenditure by 3 categories: foods/drinks/tobacco, clothing/footwear, and leisure/education in 2002.
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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

First I would like to discuss why is it important to share much information about scientific research, business and the academic world. When I was in school I didn't know about that where should I go where should I persue my further studies and what discipline should I choose, So on that time some senior help me and guide my about where should I go and what should I do. Similarly when teacher gave me a topic to do research on it, there was a senior who helped me out. And those who think that they don't what to share their thoughts, ideas with other others is totally disgusting and I'm totally disagree with that type of people.
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It is sometimes thought that people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and understanding of each others. To what extent do you agree.

The IIT Bombay administration on Tuesday issued circular warning students against participating in "anti-national activities" or to "distribute posters or leaflets/pamphlets" within the campus.
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Do you agree or disagree with the idea that high schools should prohibit students from using their sell phones at school?

I disagree with this opinion. This is because I think if the school prohibits using the smartphone, some people may suffer from disadvantages because of this restriction. For example, suppose that there is a student who can study by himself effectively while listening to the music, if the school do this, this student cannot study by himself effectively and this may affect his grade. Because of this reason, I disagree with this opinion.
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Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that spoken communication is more Strong than written communication. I agree with this topic.
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Today more and more tourists are visiting place where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

In the modern innovative, peopele mostly like visiting different types of places.It is well known fact that travelling has become an integral part of our lives.Mostly people visting those areas where a lot of difficulties but people like to visting those areas in which Sahara desert and Artartica.In my believed a lot of disadvantages rather than adavantages.
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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans demonstrate the difference between University's sport centre now, and after redesign. Overall, what stands out from the plans is that while present university sports centre looks relatively small and compact, future plan illustrates significant redevelopment of most facilities and creation of additional zones and layouts Focusing on the west and east sides of the university sports centre, the most noticeable changes and those relating to outdoor courts, which will be replaced by leisure pool on west and sports hall in east. However, although the former side will be added by changing room, the latter will be consumed by two dance studios and changing room as well. Regarding to the main entrance on the south, there will be locate sports shop at the left side and cafe at the right side. However, despite this, present Gym, which is on the north, will be expanded in the future.
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Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often said that the waste from homes does not achieve the maximum
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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.

Large supermarkets have recently introduced online grocery shopping. While many shoppers do their food shopping online, many still tend to do their shopping the traditional way by visiting the supermarkets. I will discuss in the essay why people love to do shopping online and why others like to visit supermarket to make shopping is ultimately superior.
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