IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1704

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity, some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.?

Art is the externalization of the skills of an artist. Therefore there are people who are in favour to provide full liberty to the artist, however, others oppose this opinion freely. In my opinion, freedom is neccessary but it should be given up to an extent, and proper servallience to avoid any unpleasant situation.

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

The past fifty years have seen a significant increase in the popularity of private cars. While it is argued by many that using own cars may be beneficial in terms of their time-saving and convenience, yet there still remains some arguments that using own cars results in severe pollution for the environment. Overall, it is my personal view that the disadvantages of using private cars are far outweigh their benefit.

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online shopping seems to be replacing the traditional method of buying. however some buyers are sceptical to this practice. discuss both benefits and risks associated with online shopping

For those who are interested it is possible to surf the Internet and read articles discussing online shopping. There are several points of view on this matter. The first claim that soon online shopping will change ordinary methods of buying. An alternative belief regards this is harmful and considers a lot customers against to this practice as the most important in that case essay both points of view are going to be examined and a particular opinion will be provided.

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays traffic congestion is a main problem in most of the major cities around the world. Therefore we have to face traffic blocks on our way to the work. This is because of the the emerging use of private vehicles than public transport and if we want to avoid such traffic blocks, we have to utilize our public transport more than own vehicles.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Health is the significant topic in our life. Some people believe that establish more sports infrastructure can make our health better, while others think that it just a small influence on this problem and there will be another alterative method can be use. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument, and give my own point of view.

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

With the increasing use of transports, many people use their private cars to commute and considered acquiring more car ownership. Owning private transport brings many benefits, however, using more cars can increase pollution and makes climate change become worst.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.

There is no doubt that computers have been an inevitable part of todays' educational system. While some people believe that this is a progressive advancement, others argue that this can have some detrimental effects on students. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguement and explain my support for the former view.

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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Many young people work on a volunteer basis and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I disagree that we all should force teenagers to do unpaid work.

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Some people feel that it is wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Others feel that there are benefits for the animals and for the humans. Discuss both sides of this debate and give your personal view.

While some people believe all animals should be free to roam in their natural environments, there are others who believe there are good reasons to keep animals in captivity. There are valid points on both sides which I will expand on below.

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Some people say that the Internet is responsible for destroying the social skills of teenagers and young adults. Why do you think the Internet is seen as dangerous in this way and what can we do to ensure that it does not harm the social development of teenagers and young adults?

In recent times, the deteriorating state of social skills of teenagers and young adults has been attributed to the excess use of the internet. While the use of the internet in itself is not harmful to the development of youths’ sociability, this must be put under control for better usage. This essay discusses the dangers of the internet on younger persons’ social development and possible solutions to curb it.

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In some countries people's weight has significantly increased while their level of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest to solve this problem?

There is no doubt that our world has been facing different kinds of environmental issues.While some believe that political leaders are responsible to tackle this, I strongly think that it is not only limited them, even common people has significant role to play.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Currently, most governments spend a large part of their budget not only on public services, but also the arts. Although it is necessary to channel a proportion of government money toward this sector, most should be spent on public services. It is important that the government spends a significant amount of its bud get on public services because these are our hospitals, roads and schools, and they determine quality of life. Taking the UK as an example, the government has recently reduced public spending on health and education, resulting in increased waiting lists for hospital treatments and fewer teachers, both of which will have further adverse effects in the future. This demonstrates the importance of ensuring that a large proportion of government money is spent on public services as it is the only way to maintain standards and accessibility for everyone. However, this does not mean that the arts should be completely neglected. Firstly, it is difficult for many...

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT READING BOOKS FOR ENTERTAINMENT IS A WASTE OF CHILDREN’S TIME. THEY THINK THAT THEIR CHILDREN SHOULD READ ONLY SERIOUS EDUCATIONAL BOOKS. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION.

Some parent think that their children reading books for fun is wrong use of time, and they think that children just only read academic books. I disagree with this notion. Firstly, reading books for entertainment can change child's mood. Secondly, child is more willing to read some interesting books. This essay will discuss why reading entertaining books is better than read only serious educational books.

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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Due to advances in technology, web-based platforms are increasingly becoming popular. Even though, it serves as a multitasking public domain, precautions should be exercised as and when necessary.

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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?

Industries are expanding rapidly into different demographic regions due to extensive globalization and urbanization. Despite the fact that it is showing an impact in day-to-day life. I firmly believe, the trend is not detrimental.

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The advances in air travel are focused only in first class and this seems to have left others with no benifits at all. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays air travel is one of the most developed service in the transport sphere. Air companies offer different types of seats before the flight, but prices vary. Most part of air travellers cannot afford business class. Some people think that air plane stuff leaves economy class without any benefits and all goods are used only by business class. In my opinion, that is only halved true and this issue will be taken to consideration here.

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The internet contains a lot of information that can help people, however, sometimes the information is inaccurate or wrong. Do you agree or disagree?

In the present world, it cannot be refute that the internet is proving a great asset for the whole society and it is acting as a source of providing information, which has a plenty of benefits for the general public.Despite the fact, undeniably, many times unrealistic news is also conveyed.This essay agrees with the given information because some social evils misuse the contents and spread rumours, which cannot be considered appropriate.

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Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that zoos are unpleasant, while others believe that zoos are protecting the rare animals to be safe. this essay will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view.

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some people think that children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that children today are not as fit and healthy as in the previous years.

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ONE PROBLEM FACED ALMOST EVERY LARGE CITY IS TRAFFIC CONGESTION WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS?

Nowadays, traffic congestion is the major problem that every region in the world has to deal with the problem. Growth of the population, which leads to the deficiency of public transport and leads to the development of private transports.

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