IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1979

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many. However, there are some who argue that it is actually destroying our communication skill. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As the consequence of tremendously improving technology, cell phones, computers and these gadgets providing an exquisite ways for communication online through Facebook, WhatsApp, email, video call and by so. According to this it is considered by some that these are the fabulous and effective ways due to myriad merits. Whereas, some intend that it can be a prime reason of destruction of communication skill. I think that both aspects should be analyzed. However, i am in favour of online communication.

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In the modern world, a university education is essential in order to get a rewarding job and earn a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, having a university degree is generally seen as the way to get a good job and decent salary. I agree with this view on the whole but I also think that some people might achieve these things in their own way. There are indeed many benefits of a university education. Firstly, universities are places where many gifted people gather together in one place to pass the fruits of human knowledge from one generation to the next. After spending several years in such a place a student should possess a deep understanding of their field, which they can then utilise in their future career. As an expert, it is much more likely that they will receive a high salary, certainly in comparison with lower-skilled workers. In addition, having immersed themselves in a subject for so long, it is also likely that the student will develop a deep interest in their area of study, which will motivate them to continue to improve their knowledge and skills through their whole career. ...

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Education is very important. How can children who are disinterested in study be motivated to learn?

Although knowledge comes from various streams , education has proven to be the path to knowledge. Losing the interest in education can be due to various reasons and understanding the reasons could pave way for better education for children.

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In many countries, people buy imported food rather than food produced locally. why do people do that? how can people be encouraged to eat locally produced food?

Today, people live for their status not for their health so they buy imported food against organic food or locally produced food.

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In some countries fast food restaurant and supermarket give money to school to promote their products do you think this is a positive or negative development

School are place in which a child can lead into the good manner. in many countries, restaurant and malls give funds for the product promotion to school.However, school are not medium for advertising of goods. I think this is affirmative for school but it is contradictory for children.

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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well others say that teachers only teach students academic subjects discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s era, schools are turning out students who have a great capacity to use their minds and brain powers, but lack of a well-grounded sense of moral obligations to others, some claim, teachers should be born responsibility for making pupils well-disciplined but others hold the view that the phenomenon should be continued, however, I believe the position of common sense should be prior option.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are many people living in abroad. A lot of people are facing language barrier that can be a cause of several problems such as low number of friends, difficult to understand the environment in which they are living.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

India is highly populated country and in modern era, we witnessed number of private vehicles got increased. I agree that, electric cars should replace all cars that burn fossil fuels.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

An increasing number of people are nowadays more concerned about the spare time activities. Some are of the opinion that it is necessary to utilize the free time by involving into the activities which enhance the mind and overall growth of a person while others maintain that those time should be used to rest and relax. This essay will discuss how both ways could impact the human’s life.

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In some coutries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. what are the resons for this ? How can we solve the problem ?

The issue of decreasing visitors in art galleries has been a matter of great concern in recent years. Both the media, as well as social developments that happened over the last two decades, may explain this growing problem. And yet, there are ways to reverse this trend. In the following essay, I will elaborte on the main reasons for this problem, and pride possible solutions.

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Some people think that watching TV causes weight problems in children .Do you agree with this view? What solutions can you suggest to tackle children's weight problems?

It is thought by some people that weight problems in children are caused by watching TV.While I agree that excessive hours in front of the TV can contibute to this problem, diet also plays a role.Furthermore, weight problems can only be dealt with by tackling the issues behind then.

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Some People think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government fundings are bliss for many underprivileged people. There are many programs and research projects conducted by the government. Instead of spending money on the arts, it can be effectively spent in forest conservation and exploring space science.

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Some parents and teachers think that children’s behaviour should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In today’s era, a group of people believe that, adolescent’s etiquette need to supervise firmly by their guardians and mentors as it is life changing factor. Whereas few individuals oppose this view and put stress on, they permitted to bearing by themselves.

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Some people argue that working in a large company is important, others however give preferance to work in a small company.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is irrefutable that working environment plays a crucial role in everyone's life. Few nation hold this point that doing work in a huge company is pivotal,on the other hand others said working in a small area is better than big company.Both views have their own points.In the upcoming paragraphs I will describe both views and then give my perspective.

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Some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

University education is considered of higher value and eventually aids in building career. Many people opine that students studying in universities should learn many subjects while others believe that such pupil should only study particular subjects. This essay will highlight why teaching few subjects are beneficial for university going students.

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For some people, the ideal holiday is to get away from their normal routine by staying in a hotel or camping in a countryside. Others prefer to stay at home and do things they do not normally have time for. What do you think are the benefits of going away on holidays? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern world, travelling abroad has become a popular activity among the citizens. However, there are some type of people who prefer staying at home, and spending days with family and friends. After pondering these phenomena, I believe that being in foreign countries will definitely expand peoples' horizons. In this regard, holidays in other countries have more advantages than staying at home.

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Some people think that people should choose job based on their income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is an important factor while choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?

People usually select a certain job relying on criteria which fulfills their requirements. Some people opine that masses prefer adopting particular work because of the higher salary they offer that resolve financial burden of family. This essay will highlight why money is essential element to look upon while picking a job, however few individuals also notice other aspects during the process.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

So far, 65 years is the standard age of retirement, for every employee, without considering their occupation, which is injustice, asserted by folks as they consider, certain workers must get retirement and their savings early to the standard age. As I believe, to get retire before the time can be considerate in regards of duties, however, if everyone has desires of early resting, then it seems quite unfair in perspective of discipline. Usually, soldiers are found in borders or in camps, despite of their homes throughout the whole life and on account of it, they deserve early relief from the services.

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In most countries, children wear uniforms to school. Some people argue that this is not a good idea. Discuss and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been a change in public attitudes towards the way of children presenting themselves in schools. There has been a movement against uniforms; in other words, children wearing everyday attire. Uniforms provide a level playing field for children of different socio-economic backgrounds, religions and cultures.

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