IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1976

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

Despite of better access to education,why many adults are not able to read/write.What many ways they are disadvantaged.How can governmnet help in this scenario..

It is often argued that in spite of an immense access to eduactional facilities, there exists a multitude of adolescents still not able to learn the fundamental reading and writing skills. There are many causes of this worrying trend . However,the government can take the necessary steps to mitigate this issue.

band

All over the world societies are facing growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adult. What are the reason for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Globally, the percentage increase of overweight children and adults has been a major concern in the society. Several issues has cause this increase. However, i believe some measures must be taken, in order to reduce this this diturbing trend of obesity.

band

These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Do you thinks this is a positive or negative development?

In the recent years , it has become far more popular for people to spend a huge amount of money on entertaining activities such as buying ticket to go to sport competition or to participate in cultural events.

band

Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land as becoming scarce, the worlds meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world's meat consumption? What kind of problem might such measures cause?

Providing meat products is required to use land which has to be perceived in a convenient way. Due to the need for a vast area for providing meat, it is argued to reduce it has to be taken some steps towards reducing the consumption of meat among people all over the world. This essay will outline two measures can be done and anticipated problems caused by them.

band

Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

In the summary,parents wish their children to be engaged even in free time by getting a part time job.The reason might be just to make sure children won't do any wrong things in boredom.

band

Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I definitely agree with the notion that individuals should change their career at least once in life. A number of arguments surround my opinion. To begin with there are some strong benefits that can come from a career change. One of the major benefits of changing careers is money. People may make more per year than they did with their previous job. This can help to lessen the financial burden of an individual or family. Secondly, a career change brings opportunity to learn new skills. They will have to learn new actions and meet new expectations. This general education that is formed through a career change will be beneficial in the future. What is more, those who have a wide range of careers under their belt will have more job security in the long run. Instead of being proficient at one career path, a person can be proficient with two or even more. If he loses his job, he can seek out jobs in different career fields, as opposed to one career field. Therefore, ...

band

Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. What is your viewpoint on this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, many employers are encouraging their staff to have a dress code in the workplace. The main benefit of a fixed outfit is that it is a promotional item for the organization and the drawback is the boredom of wearing the same thing regularly. In my opinion, the dress code should be appreciated at the place of work considering its positive effects.

band

Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or a negative development.

In recent years, telecommuting has become more accessible for people thank to affordable computer technologies. I tend to agree that such kind of method of work and study is beneficial for adults and children respectively.

band

Some people think that it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent times, work-life balance is a growing concern among the people. Some say that a person should spend more time at work in developing a successful career while others argue that it is crucial to spend time with family and friends. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why spending time with family and friends is superior.

band

environmental problems such as pollution and climate variation are increasing nowadays. the government have take some measures at a global level. but they only get a few solution .why it is so? how can this problem be solved ?

Nowadays environmental problem increase day by day like, pollution and climate variation are increasing at a great rate.The government help take some measures at a global level. what are the reason behind this? and how can this problem be solved?

band

Even though globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

There is a rapid increase in globalization. Internationalization has many significant benefits to the world economy whilst there are also drawbacks to it. This essay agrees that increase in globalization is significantly beneficial than its disadvantages. The essay will firstly discuss the benefits of free trade to individuals as well as the local business and secondly, it will discuss on the exploitation of the natural resources of the developing countries.

band

the use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places and so mobile phone should also be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

in this technological Era the usage of mobile phones in many places becomes implied is smoking. Some people believe that cell phones should be prohibited at some places. I totally agree with cell phone ban in decided places and following essay, I will state my opinion based on facts and example.

band

In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

In the modern society many peopel try to look for different job which they didnot experenced before, I will discuss what is reson why and is it a demerit or merit ot our society

band

Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that, the government should take adequate measures to aware people about preserving their living environment. This essay will argue why, the government has a huge role in this matter.

band

Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, it is believed by many parents that smacking is a best way to control their children’s behavior. This essay will outline the facts to believe that this is an inappropriate approach

band

Some people believe it is better to study subjects that have practical applications. Others, however think it is better to study subjects that are theoretical. Discuss both views

There are different ways of learning in school. Most people believe that the practical style of studying is beneficial while others think the theoretical pattern is better. This essay will discuss both views.

band

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Now a days, the competition between students are become natural because of some of the educational institutions and the parents.There were mixed opinions about the competition between students. The healthy competition leads to a good career. However, the high competition in the education create problems to their life as well. In this essay, I will explain my opinion about both the healthy and unhealthy competition based on my knowledge.

band

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Attending collage is one of the most exciting milestones in the life young men and women. Although there are many reasons why people prefer to go to collage, I believe educational and professional opportunities, as well as new social experiences are the most imprtant considerations. In the following essay, I will provide specific reasons and examples to support my answer.

band

MANY PEOPLE WORK LONG HOURS, LEAVING VERY LITTLE TIME FOR LEISURE ACTIVITIES. DOES THIS SITUATION HAVE MORE ADVANTAGES OR MORE DISADVANTAGES?

Nowadays there is an increasing number of people who dedicate a huge amount of their lives working for extended periods, leading to almost no time left for enjoyment. I strongly believe such behavior brings more disadvantages than benefits, due to health and family issues that could emerge from this.

band

The qualities that a truly successful person in our modern life has cannot be learned at universities and similar academic institutions. To what extent do you agree?

Higher educational departments do not educate masses about the positive aspects of a personality, which is required to achieve success in the life. In my opinion, I do not agree with this view because these institutes definitely plays a crucial role in building the positive character of a person. In the following paragraphs, I shall putforth some arguments to support my view.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.