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Today, most people get married and gave birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development?

Getting married is considered a very important part of our life, nowadays a colossal number of people prefer to get married and give birth in their thirties and not at their career building age. Is it not a matter of concern for the society? In my opinion, it is more beneficial to get married at an early stage of life of an individual and the society as well.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some education. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes.
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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?

Nowadays, the question of whether physicians should be responsible for educating their patients on how to improve their health or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this issue is caused by many reasons, there are not without workable solutions for that.
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Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that indigenous works of art should be given priority to put on display in cultural institutions such as museums and art galleries rather than sharing space with art pieces originating from foreign cultures. While I think displaying local art us beneficial to residents, I agree that exhibiting exotic artworks is of paramount importance.
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Visa regulations should be relaxed for overseas students. Do you agree or disagree?

The 20th century came up with a concept of globalization, which made the whole world as virtually one nation by dissolving the physical boundaries among them. Consequently, the upcoming generation has adopted a new trend in education, and they are migrating to developed countries for studying their higher education. Some critics assert that the visa rules for this migration should be loosened up, which will make this facility more accessible to all, however I completely disagree with this and opine that visa rules should be kept strictly and the essay will outline the reasons for this.
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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this issue?

It has been a common trend in a number of countries that children from a young age get involved in some sort of work for which they get paid. For this matter, people hold different views. For some, involvement of youngsters in the work for salary is really inappropriate whereas others look at the positive side as working at a young age can help them to gain experience and inculcate various good etiquettes. I also agree with the latter view.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Successful career and a sophisticated lifestyle are the two important requirements of the modern world. In recent years, owning a business has gained more popularity over having a job and working in a multinational company. This essay will discuss so as to why being self-employed is not a great career option.
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In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

It is undeniable that technological and scientific developments have tremendously benefited people’s life in various ways. However, the arts still win the credit by filling us with insights and values that science has failed to.
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Some people say that travel helps us to appreciate other cultures. How true is this statement? Do you think that people who travel a lot appreciate other cultures more than those who stay at home?

Thanks to the globalization and the development of transport, travel is getting more popular. It is claimed that travel improved the appreciation of other cultures. In my opinion, enthusiastic travellers can understand the values of cultures better than those at home for some certain reasons.
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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

English is fast becoming a global language. As a result, it is predicted by some language experts that the entire human population will speak one common language in the years to come. I believe that this is going to be a positive development. By providing more business opportunities to people across the globe, and bringing advancements in science and technology, it will serve as a tool for future human progress.
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Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time. Do you think it has more advantages or disadvantages?

It is increasingly popular today that some individuals opt to take a period of time off to apply for a job or go somewhere before pursing tertiary education. My own view on this matter is that it has more drawbacks than benefits which also show some merits.
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children learn new language in the primary school

The process of acquiring a foreign language is critically conducted in the primary school based on the opinion of professionals. In my personal view, I strongly agree with this statement since the period of primary school is the golden age for children to learn something new.
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In some countries, people follow the latest fashion and hairstyles. In your opinion, what is influencing this? Is this a good or bad thing?

Citizens of some nations tend to keep up with the latest fashion and hairstyles. In my opinion, celebrity influence is the root cause of this trend and it is a bad thing. Firstly, this essay will discuss how it changes the personality of the person and secondly, how the compulsive urge to stay updated with fashion can be a problematic factor when it comes to finances.
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Some people think that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree.

Some people hold the view that increasing taxes on unhealthy products can encourage people to lead a healthy lifestyle. I partly agree with this argument as I believe that other measures should also be implemented.
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1. Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries thats people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

Nowadays, tourism plays a viral role in the economic development of nations. Although, it is true that local cultures and environments of the countries are affected negatively for some reasons, there are still some solutions that tourists can take to minimize these damages.
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As well as making money, business should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

In the competitive business world, corporations face a barrage of problems that are waiting to be solved. Some of them are finance related and others are related to business operations that involve social issues. I hold the view that a company should not only have the ability to make a profit but also champion social responsibilities.
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GOVERNMENTS SHOULD NOT INVEST IN ARTS SUCH AS MUSIC AND THEATER. GOVERNMENTS MUST INVEST MORE IN PUBLIC SERVICES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE?

Government money can be invested in many spheres of society. While some people are convinced that finances must be spent on public services, it is also agreed that the sphere of art requires funds to increase the level of cultural education in the public and make a good progress in economy.
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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Healthy mind and healthy body is the need of this hour. While, some people contend that it's an individual accountability to look after their own fitness and intake of healthy food. Others, however, argue that the legislation should intervene to ascertain that their nationals follow a nutritious diet. I firmly opine, that an amalgamation of these two thoughts can lead to a healthier civilization all together. This essay will examine both views and will try to draw an inference.
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Children are at such age of their life when they barely know between the right and the wrong. It is very necessary for parents and teachers to teach them, first, by suggestion followed by punishment if they manage to do the same mistake. This essay agrees that it is acceptable to give child punishment so they know the difference between good and bad. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact that punishment teaches children to be responsible and secondly, discuss punishment doesn’t always have to be physical.
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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We are living in a technology driven society now. The pioneer and game-changer technologic development no doubt had been the Internet which came to people’s lives in the 1990’s. After the arrival of Internet or world wide web, the system of every sector has changed and stayed in a position to comply with it. Education is one of the sectors which had been affected from what Internet brought to our lives. As a result, universities started to run online education courses, workshops or even diploma programs which must be considered as a positive development. I strongly believe that online courses carried out by universities provided diversity in the topics of study and convenience irrespective of time and venue.
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