IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 106

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

More and more individuals are moving forwards to buy branded products because big merchants spent huge amounts in sales and marketing. The main problem this cause is it destroys the local markets and the most viable solution is to promote and give incentives to the small entrepreneurs.

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In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

Teenage is the most crucial period of an individual's life, regardless of gender and sometimes it becomes necessary to keep the children under certain boundaries. It is heard that a curfew has been imposed over the teens preventing them to go out alone after a specific time at night unless an adult is with them. In my opinion, this sort of strictness is essential for the well-being and the future of the kids, but it should be up to a certain extent.

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Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, young people are living under an increasing stress. Some believe that the major source of pressure is sports competitions. They believe that teenagers should be prevented from taking part in those events. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement of banning youth from sports events.

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Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent do you agree?

Many people believe that nowadays many global cities have several problems are from increasing car usage. In my point of view, it is hard to concur to such claims. Therefore, in the following paragraphs there are persuasive reasons to discuss this issue in depth.

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Some people think that these days people have too much options. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, people have numerous options to select a career and other things. I totally agree with the given statement. This essay will highlight various alternatives that are available for the citizens of a country.

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There is less communication between family members. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

As electronic devices play an increasingly influential role in our lives, it is suggested that there has been an unprecedented decline in the interpersonal connections not only with peers, colleagues and business associates but also with immediate family. I completely agree with this assertion and provide evidence for why face-to-face interaction is deteriorating these days.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that celebrities, these days are looked upon for their money and fashion rather than their achievements, which are impressionable to youngsters. In my opinion, I completely agree with this above statement, and this essay will discuss and support my stand.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250words.

Only ministries and big organizations can enhance the ecosystem, citizens cannot do anything. I totally disagree with this view because every taxpayer can participate charity work organized by non-profit foundations as well as they can keep their local community clean and inspire a new generation.

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Some people believe that the use of mobile phones in public is annoying as smoking and should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people opine that mobile phones should be banned in public places as they are as annoying as smoking. I vehemently disagree with this point of view as, life without mobile phones is unimaginable in the present scenario. This essay will explain in detail the reasons for my disagreement.

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Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe that talent is genetic, some others feel that it can be achieved through study. Although there are some living examples showing that brain power comes from the family, I personally believe that every human can adapt it by conscious study and learning.

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Giving lectures in halls to large numbers of people is an outdated method of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s modern world, some people believe that studying with technology could be a better way to learn. While this may be valid to a certain extent, I think having lectures in an auditorium should be retained as it provides a good learning method.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums have long been known as a great place for people to learn more about the history as well as enjoy the mysterious beauty of artefacts. However, there exist several museums that require an amount of money called entrance fees. In my opinion, this action is a two-sided affair having both negative and positive aspects which will be discussed as follows.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

The curriculum of schools and colleges paves the way for shaping the future of students. It is a notion that in all levels of institutes, from kindergarten to postgraduate universities, the focus is on memorising facts and historical data. I agree with this opinion because there is no modification in the syllabus of the students for decades, and some administrative jobs require these learning skills which will be explained in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

Nowadays, There has been a significant increase in the number of machines available and each offering a variety of uses. While it is up to an individual to use it in their home, others may not share the same opinion and would rather perform domestic duties the traditional way. While both of these choices offer some merits, we will look at both viewpoints and discuss the pros and cons.

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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

Since the beginning of the twenty first century, a plethora of environmental issues has been faced by people across the globe, out of many, the global warming is an acute one. There are many human activities behind the increased level of the earth's surface and it has deleterious effects on humans. This essay is an attempt to explain the seriousness about this global problem and suggests some solutions to overcome this issue.

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Some people think that modern technology has enhanced sociable behaviour, but others think it has reduced social interaction. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's technologically enhanced era, it is considered by some that latest technical development has improved social etiquette, while there are others with the believe that it has decreased civil communication. In this essay I will portray both the views and present my opinion.

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Nowadays people are affected by social media and the internet. Is it a good or a bad trend in your opinion?Explain it by giving your own example.

In today's technologically advanced society, one significant point of concern is the impact of using social networks and internet on people's life. While many argue that it has some negative influence, I oppose the statement.

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In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

The safety of the youth is argued by many to be pivotal to the societies’ development and well-being. Adolescents, in some regions of the United States, are placed under a curfew, forbidding them from being outdoors without the supervision of a fully-grown person during a late-night hour. From my vantage point, having this time limit can be highly beneficial for both teens and the society.

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Some people think that it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that companions play a vital role on an individual lifestyle. While many people believe that it is necessary to make friendship with those who have a similar point of view. Others argue that it is essential to maintain friendship with people who hold different thoughts. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, and explain my support for the latter view.

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Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

There are various kinds of drugs and Tobacco is one of them and there is no restriction to the people to use it. There is an argument that compared with other drugs such as Heroine and Pathedrine, tobacco should be banned. This essay totally disagrees with this view because nicotine has a different impact on human than other drugs and it can be used for health treatment. In my opinion, it is better to make a new regulation than banning.

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