IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 103

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have an significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?

Physical assault is seen commonly these days on entertainment portals. A few think that these movies and games cause a bad influence on an individual's behaviour, while others feel that the people act by their own will. This essay will discuss that, watching violence continuously has a damaging effect on a person's thinking. In my opinion, this type of entertainment should not be encouraged.

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It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that to live in the distance from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with this viewpoint point as living far will teach to be independent as well as can cause some social problems.

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As well as making money business should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree.

In the contemporary world, all the corporate companies and organizations are keen towards making profits in their businesses. Besides this, they should posses social responsibilities.I am in concord with this notion.

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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Studying online is a conspicuous trend which is essential towards a child's growth and development. While some people believe that children's learning process should be strictly online, others argue that books should be utilized. Personally, I believe that both modes of learning should be used interchangeably, in order to achieve optimum result. This essay will expatiate on both views as well as the writer's viewpoint.

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Nowadays, the football supporters behave violently. What cause? how can we solve it?

Games and sports are a part of our life. Football is known as the universal sport.Recently, the football hooliganism has increased significantly. This essay elucidates the reasons and the manoeuvres to resolve it.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

The majority of people think that the melody plays a vital role in our modern world, which can reduce the gap of culture and generation. In my opinion, I totally agree with this point of view for many reasons and will discuss below with the subsequent examples.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

The Senior citizen ratio has enhanced in many countries. Similarly, a group of people think that, it is a detrimental factor to their nations. While others assume that, elder people are important to the community. In my opinion, older people play a crucial role in nation's socioeconomic prospects. This essay will scrutinize both the factors and elucidate my views on the same.

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Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don't. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, sportsman is more influential on new generations. So, some people believe that professional athletes can create good role models for adolescence. However, some argue that they should not be good models. Personally, I strongly agree that athletes can be good role models.

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Some people believe that allowing children make their own choices on everyday matters( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One common area of debate among parents is the extent to which children should be trusted to make their own choices and, the potential impact they will have in their sense of responsibility. Although, decision-making skills will help in some ways, I believe parents should dictate their decisions for children in order to make them aware of others.

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Some people think that life is better in cities, however others claim that village life is far better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the biggest debate humans have is whether city life is better than village life or vice versa. However, I believe that rural life is far better than urban lifestyle. This essay will indulge in both views.

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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. School should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subject such as information technology. To what extent do you agree.

Nowadays, we cannot deny that education is the most important for children. Education has a duty to prepare children to live in the modern world with happiness. There are many subjects that were taught in school. Some people believe that school should focus on the subjects such as information technology and deduct art and music. In my view, I strongly disagree with this statement.

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Some People believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports play a pivotal role in people's lives. A host of citizens holds the assumption that being a fruitful cricketer, footballer, one's inherent forte is prime. However, others believe that becoming accustomed to do diligence can lead someone to stand at the apex position of sports' career. I believe that strenuous tasks provide the summit position of sports world.

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In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Night curfew is imposed on the US adolescents, whom it is obligatory to be indoors, except accompanied by a mature or grown up. In my view, this is the safest way to protect them from juvenile crime as well as from paedophile and miscreant traps.

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Universities should accept numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Higher institutions ought to accept proportions of boys and girls students in all subjects. I completely agree with the statement because it will foster equal opportunity and prevent discrimination.

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Some people think money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days, gifts are common and they are usually appreciated by the recipients. Some people believe that money is the best present for the youth while others argue that financial aids towards education or vocational skills acquisition are the most important gifts to youngsters. I support this latter view.

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In the past, people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture. These days, most people wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, people are changing their dressing sense and adopt Western culture's clothes so all people looks like same so that I think its positive trend. Some reasons for my inclinations are articulated in ensuring paragraphs.

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Some people believe that the only purpose of film is to entertain. Others say that films should always have some educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is irrefutable that cinema has changed the way we look at the entertainment industry. Some people believe that films should be made with knowledgeable content, while others argue that entertainment should be the sole purpose of the films. I tend to agree with the latter part and in this essay, I will present both sides of the argument with sufficient examples.

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Government's investment in the arts, such as music and the theater is the waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a tendency to believe that the government should allocate budget for community services instead of wasting that on promoting the fine art. I completely disagree with this view and this essay will discuss some beneficial aspects of arts which need to be more supported.

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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of attending higher education has raised much concern of the public. Many claim that young people can only be successful with the knowledge learned at university, I, however, strongly believe such qualities should be obtained in both academic institutions and workplace.

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Some parents allow their teenage children to live independently, away from home. Other parents don’t want their teenage children to live away from them. Which do you think is better and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

Parents around the world have different styles of raising their children, some may be strict and others may be lenient. A number of teenagers are allowed to live by themselves, far away from home, whilst others are under close supervision of their parents. In my opinion, I think kids should not be permitted to live independently and I will give reasons to support my position in this essay.

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