IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 105

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In the last decade, there has been a great increase in the number and variety of online courses available to adults. This has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, however, other students see these courses as less effective than classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?

Over the last ten years, because of the rapid growth in technology such as the internet and telecommunication, the mode of learning has seen a shift from traditional classrooms to online education. While many invite the option of digital education, some observe that classroom learning is more effective. This essay will detail on the various positive and negative aspects of learning through digital content.

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Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to get successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, parents are more concerned about their kid’s education and some thought that activities which are assigned to kids by their academic institutions for their houses are the best way to keep the kids active in their education while others think that they should be given leisure time free from the academic burden at home. I personally think that homework would be a must to do thing in any curriculum of the school as this keeps the child brain active. This essay will analyse this situation using examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey in order to demonstrate points and support claims.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The rapid increase in modernization has been adversely affected the economy, in the sense, that all the stores in local markets and cities are on the urge of obsolete, the reason is, emerging trends of shopping online. Therefore, I completely agree with the statement because once people start trusting the online retailers, they found shopping more convenient and time-saving.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The rapid increase in globalization and modernization had adversely affected the economy, in the sense, that all the stores in local markets and cities are on the urge of obsolete, the reason is, emerging trends of shopping online. I completely agree with the statement because, once people start trusting the online retailers, they found shopping more convenient and time saving.

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SOME PEOPLE CLAIM THAT NOT ENOUGH OF THE WASTE FROM HOMES IS RECYCLED. THEY SAY THAT THE ONLY WAY TO INCREASE RECYCLING IS FOR GOVERNMENTS TO MAKE IT A LEGAL REQUIREMENT. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU THINK LAWS ARE NEEDED TO MAKE PEOPLE RECYCLE MORE OF THEIR WASTE?

Many people believe that the garbage produced from houses is not recycled properly. They affirm that the authorities should create new laws in order to obligate people to improve recycling. The question is, why the waste is not enough recycled? In my opinion the waste is not enough recycled, because some people do not know how to do it, and they do not have a place to share old goods. This essay will disagree with this statement.

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In some states in the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

A system where a child is restricted from going out when it is past certain period of the night except an adult follow them around is practiced in certain parts of the United State of America. In my opinion, because this kind of curfew has its advantages and disadvantages, it should only be implemented with caution after careful consideration is given to its merits and demerits.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

IT IS OFTEN SAID THAT CHILDRENS EATING HABITS HAS CHANGED SINCE ONE DECADE AND THAT IS WHY THERE IS 20% BOOST IN THE OBESE OFFSPRINGS. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW THE AVALABILITY OF A VARIETY OF FAST FOOD IS THE MAJOR REASON BEHIND THIS ISSUE AND SECONDLY, WHAT ARE THE DETRIMENTAL IMPACT ON THE JUVENILE'S HEALTH.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.

It is a view of many people that in order to save nature from emissions, the price of fuel should be increased to minimize the use of cars and motorbikes. I completely agree that imposing taxes or raise the prices of fuel is an optimal solution by promoting other available resources for travelling with minimum carbon footprint to enhance environmental conditions.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good members of the society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some opine guardians should literate their offsprings about how to be an ideal citizen, whereas others think other places such as school, college and university are the perfect place to learn it. Although education plays a big role to become a good human by practicing discipline in the classroom and respecting teachers, I personally believe parents who make a nation proud by teaching their children about manners and mental development.

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Television Sporting shows such as the Olympics motivate the youth who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree? Include relevant examples in your answer and provide your own opinion.

Nowadays, sports shows attract many viewers. It is believed that games telecasts on TV brings enthusiasm towards exercise among young people who do not like doing physical activity.I disagree with this notion. Individual interests and the message driven by sports are the cardinal reasons which will be analysed in the before an opinion is drawn in subsequent paragraphs.

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Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV and reading them on newspaper . What is the reason? Is it good idea to copy famous personalities?

In this contemplate era, it is often seen that common people who are fans of any popular celebrity try to copy them when they watch these prominent personalities on television or read their articles in magazines or newspapers. There is a plethora of these factors that people tend to achieve their lifestyle. But, this is not admirable thing.

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The increase use of air transport to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season is a positive development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the growth of aviation, many countries use this mode of transport to export fruit and vegetables to places where they are not in season or cannot be grown. I agree that this a positive development, and in this essay, I will support and explain this view.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

More and more individuals are moving forwards to buy branded products because big merchants spent huge amounts in sales and marketing. The main problem this cause is it destroys the local markets and the most viable solution is to promote and give incentives to the small entrepreneurs.

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In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

Teenage is the most crucial period of an individual's life, regardless of gender and sometimes it becomes necessary to keep the children under certain boundaries. It is heard that a curfew has been imposed over the teens preventing them to go out alone after a specific time at night unless an adult is with them. In my opinion, this sort of strictness is essential for the well-being and the future of the kids, but it should be up to a certain extent.

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Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, young people are living under an increasing stress. Some believe that the major source of pressure is sports competitions. They believe that teenagers should be prevented from taking part in those events. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement of banning youth from sports events.

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Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent do you agree?

Many people believe that nowadays many global cities have several problems are from increasing car usage. In my point of view, it is hard to concur to such claims. Therefore, in the following paragraphs there are persuasive reasons to discuss this issue in depth.

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Some people think that these days people have too much options. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, people have numerous options to select a career and other things. I totally agree with the given statement. This essay will highlight various alternatives that are available for the citizens of a country.

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There is less communication between family members. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

As electronic devices play an increasingly influential role in our lives, it is suggested that there has been an unprecedented decline in the interpersonal connections not only with peers, colleagues and business associates but also with immediate family. I completely agree with this assertion and provide evidence for why face-to-face interaction is deteriorating these days.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that celebrities, these days are looked upon for their money and fashion rather than their achievements, which are impressionable to youngsters. In my opinion, I completely agree with this above statement, and this essay will discuss and support my stand.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250words.

Only ministries and big organizations can enhance the ecosystem, citizens cannot do anything. I totally disagree with this view because every taxpayer can participate charity work organized by non-profit foundations as well as they can keep their local community clean and inspire a new generation.

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