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IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Writing Samples Band 6.5

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

Some people believe that animals should be treated in the same way humans are and have similar rights, whereas others think that it is more important to use them as we desire for food and medical research. This essay will discuss both points of view.

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some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having large number of toys?

During childhood, usually kids need some toys to play which make them busy and helps to improve their mental growth. As most of the toys nowadays are based on sharpening the brain of little ones. Few parents brought their kids a large amount of toys to play with, in order to make them feel happy. The essay will discuss about the pros and cons of having a large number of toys.

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In some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place?

While some individuals prefer rented accommodation in some countries, others believe that purchasing own house is more beneficial. Although renting houses could include fewer maintenance costs and property taxes, it does not provide the comfort of owning a house. In my opinion, staying in the rented house is invaluable when compared to owning a house despite its positive reasons.

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Companies sponsoring sports events for advertising purposes? What are the advantages and disadvantages for this?

Most of the companies have the utmost interest to invest money on international games which are widely popular all over the world. While I believe that sponsorship in sports bring many benefits for both team and company, many argue that it has substantial negative consequences for the player as well as the company also.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Taking a yearly time off from education after completing school and before going for higher studies in colleges is trending nowadays. This has its own set of merits such as pupil get a break from their monotonous school routine and the demerits includes the loss of interest towards academics.

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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?

As we move into the twenty-first century and with the advancement in technology, all of aspects of life are influenced by this case and education is no exception. Indeed, in some educational centres, traditional form of training have been revolutionized by new technology to some extent that the lecture is no longer the main method of education. While there are a variety of merits of a new approach, I personally believe the drawbacks are far more.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an on-going debate that children should be introduced to studying a foreign language at an early age rather than when they get to secondary school. In my opinion, I believe that the merits of learning different languages at an early era, such as exposure to other cultures and outstanding academic performance outweighs the demerits that may come with it.

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

These days, it is observed that the school student after completing this schooling opted to travel or work for a short period of time rather than directly entering into university. This essay closely monitors the benefits as well as drawbacks of such decision of students.

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In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

The number of women is increasing to enter as workforce in all the fields. Nowadays it is common for all women to participate in the workforce. However, there are both pros and cons for working women. In this essay, I will discuss some of the advantages of women participate in the workforce and some of the challenges to be overcome.

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Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

Nowadays, touring different countries has become popular among the people than ever before. It is happening because people want to take time out of their fast daily routine and when they travel to other parts of the world, it helps them to get to know the different people from different cultures who spoke different languages.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

Nowadays, it is often seen, globally, that increasing numbers of people are following the trend of not having children after marriage. The very obvious advantage of this is less responsibilities. However, loneliness is the one drawback that childless couples come around, particularly during declining years.

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In Some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Does renting an accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place?

It is undeniably true that basic human right to live is unfulfilled without having a roof on our head. Though the people from different countries might have different opinions on whether to own a place or to rent a temporary premise, I believe that owning a house is always advantageous than renting it. I would elucidate the pros and cons of the two types of accommodations in the following paragraphs.

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

WHEN E-READING INCREASES MORE AND MORE, DEFINITELY, THIS WILL BRING A DROP IN PAPER-BOOK PRODUCTION. EVEN THOUGH A NUMBER OF PEOPLE THINK IT IS A GOOD DEVELOPMENT, OTHERS HAVE CONTRARY OPINIONS. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY THERE WILL BE A DECREASE IN E-BOOK WITH THE GROWTH IN E-READERS, WHICH INCLUDES ITS CONVENIENCE AND NON-COST EFFECTIVE.

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Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some students take a rest for one year and do the work or journey before they matriculate due to some merits, whereas others do not do so because of some demerits. I would argue that the advantages of the gap year to do work or travel overweigh its disadvantages.

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Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people contend that taking a rest for one year and do the work or journey before they matriculate is advantageous for students, whereas others argue that it is not beneficial. I would argue that the merits of the gap year to do work or travel is superior to its demerits.

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Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the development.

It is an undeniable fact that technology plays an indispensable role in today’s world. Some people believe that the development of technology creates many problems for us. Personally, I absolutely agree with this idea, besides some advantages that technology contributed it still has negative impacts on people and there are two reasons why I hold this view.

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More and more people are opting for ready made food instead of freshly prepared food. Do this development has more advantages than disadvantages.

In recent years, people's food choices have remarkably changed. In today's society, a growing number of people prefer to eat processed food rather than freshly cooked ones. ,This essay will explain that while ready made edibles are more affordable and save time, the drawbacks in their consumption surpass these benefits.

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In some countries, the government promotes public transport as the primary means of transportation and discourages private vehicle ownership. Do the disadvantages of this situation outweigh the advantages

On no account should the issue with traffic on the roads be ignored. To deal with this problem in some countries it has been decided to reduce the number of private cars. I believe that the benefits of using buses and other modes of public transport far outweigh their drawbacks. This essay will first discuss using public modes of transport as the main benefit of improving the situation on the roads, followed by an analysis of a probable drawback which is the inconvenience of car using to get to the remote areas

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Many sports players advertise sport-related products. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

Advertisement is a tool which is used by an organisation for enhancing the sale of their products. It is generally seen that support companies using elegant sports player for advertising. This trend has some merits and demerits, which I will delineate in my upcoming writing.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

Having children and growing them up is a tedious task. There are parents that have a different perspective to it. Some prefer it earlier and some at a later stage. Especially, today's parent are more focused on concentrating on a career and proper planning before they think about a child. Let's see some points that butt rests the fact.

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