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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some people said that with the help of parenting and child development courses parents can improve the life of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Parenting courses have become a growing trend over the last two years. A number people believe that the life quality of children can be improved by parents who attend in parenting and child development courses which help them about parenting. I completely agree with the idea that parenting courses are the best way to improve both parenting skills and children’s lives.

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Some people believe that manufacturers should be responsible for reducing the large amounts of packaging they use. Others say consumers should avoid buying heavily packaged items. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

In the modern world, the environment pollution is on the rise due to proliferation of unnecessary packing materials. Some people think that manufacturers should be responsible to minimize usage of heavy packaging, while others are arguing its up to consumers, not to purchase highly wrapped products. Following essay will discuss both these views and outline my opinion on this statement.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Cinemas have been considered the place of entertainment since long time, and many people still prefer them for enjoying their free time. In my view, watching movies on a personal device is much more convenient and budget friendly.

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Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Global events such as the Olympics, the World cup are the opportunities for the countries to show their pride and uplifts their economy as well. However, some people think that huge amount spent for the events is unjustifiable. I totally disagree with this point and in this essay will outline the positive aspects of these events with suitable examples.

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Some think that residents should responsible for keeping thier areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

It is important that we have to keep our surroundings clean and maintain hygiene in the life. A group of people believes that the government should take steps to maintain the area and another group argue that it is an individual's duty to clean the place. In my opinion, both the authority and individual should join and take efforts to maintain our areas.

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It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spent it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Governments should emphasize on funding in a healthy lifestyle instead of investing revenue on medicines to prevent the prevailing dangerous diseases of patients. I, partially, agree with this viewpoint, because giving a healthy life of citizens is equally as important as healing of serious patients.

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SCIENCE ADVANCED SO MUCH THAT IT CAN NOW MAKE IT POSSIBLE FOR PEOPLE TO LIVE 100 YEARS OR EVEN 200 YEARS. SOME PEOPLE THINK ITS A GOOD THING, WHILE OTHERS THINK IT IS BAD… DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND WRITE YOUR OPINION.

The development of technology is projected to increase every year. Advancement in science can make it possible for people to live a century or even a couple of centuries. This essay will discuss about the both sides of the argument and my opinion on those views.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the public concern about environmental impacts increases dramatically. Some people say that the main environmental issue is the disappearance of particular species of plants and animals. While others indicate that there are more significant environmental problems. In the scope of this essay, the two views will be discussed in details and I personally agree with the second opinion.

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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that both the wealthy and the less privileged students have difficulty getting into universities. I do not quite agree with this view. In my opinion, children from affluent families can easily get admitted to top universities; however, it is quite difficult for poor students.

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shopping is the favourite pastime for most of the younger people why do you is that ? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities

Shopping has become an integral part of our life. It is true that most of the younger people are being attracted by shopping rather than other activities. In my opinion, I agree that we should also be motivated to younger people for other tasks instead of shopping

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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this.

It is often considered by some that youngsters should not be allowed to stay outside after dawn, while there are others who think that it is acceptable for teenagers to roam around at night if a guardian is accompanying them. In my opinion, I believe that such practices must be encouraged as teenage is a period where children can venture in the wrong direction, it becomes imperative to keep a close eye on them.

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Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

The traditional view that academic achievements is the main criteria of education must be challenged. In my view, teaching practical skills such as cooking and fashion is valuable and beneficial. In this easement, I will discuss that memorizing information and passing tests only cannot prepare students for life.

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"Written books are not needed because we can read almost everything on the internet". Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Reading is a habit which is developed at a very young age as it helps in personality development. Nevertheless, the question is, is it better to read a book or use the internet as everything is available on it. Both situations have their advantages and disadvantages, therefore, I would not agree or disagree with the statement.

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Some people say that holding sport competitions can cause problems for the host country. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nations worldwide competes to host an international sport occurrence. There is a controversy about its complications and benefits. On one hand, people believe that hosting such event can enhance their economy and they support it. On the other hand, individuals are more concern about their environment and resources. This easement will discuss the both sides and my own opinion.

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Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?

The human being naturally getting old day by day. A number of people, today, desire to look younger than their age. The reason is that people want to feel to be liked by other people, and have a sense of life satisfaction. I think that it is a good trend because they spend money for cosmetic products.

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Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that, whether criminals should keep imprisoned for a long time or they should give proper education and job training for came back to normal life. A lion's share of the society favours it, however the rest goes adverse it. I complete agree with the view that, criminals should give education and training instead of long prison. The following paragraph's would highlight my personal perspective along with an apt example.

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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many peope believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their childern. Do you agree or disagree?

Delinquencies among juveniles are increasing day by day. As both parents are working nowadays, they do not get enough time to look after their children and it is commonly believed as a main reason behind increasing social issues. I firmly agree wit this reason and my inclination are explained in trailed paragraphs.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many families have a dual sources of income. In most homes, both husband and wife, have to earn in order to make ends meet. However, some people have argued, that this will be of benefit to the children, while others believe that the children will be affected majorly, as they may lack parental support. In fact, I agree with the former. This essay will discuss both points of view.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the world is at a great risk with proliferation of environmental pollution. Some people are considering that increment of fuel cost will reduce these environmental issues. I agreed with this statement up to a certain extent, however, there are many other ways to deal with this issue instead of looking at only one aspect of the problem. Following essay will discuss both sides of it in detail.

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Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They don’t want their children to read any entertainment books because they think it is wast of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Readers are leaders! But some parents believe that their children should read only serious materials related to their education and should not waste time on other reading materials such as magazines, comic column in newspaper or reader's digest. I disagree with the concept of students reading only serious educational books, instead they should be allowed to read both.

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