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In many countries,children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing numbers of health issues are prevalent in young children in recent times. It is believed by some people that governments are liable to resolve this issue. I agree with this belief to some extent as in my opini
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it is sometimes thought that people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and understanding of others. To what extent do you agree?

It is a common saying that traveling makes more tolerant and open-minded. This essay strongly agrees with such a hypothesis; the essay will at first examine the ways traveling impacts one's point of view, and then reflec
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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, a large number of people are facing obesity. It has been suggested that increasing the price of high fat foods are the solution for reducing the problem. I disagree with the given idea
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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, a large number of people are facing obesity. It has been suggested that increasing the price of high fat foods are the solution for reducing this problem. I disagree with this idea and
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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Human beings are born to enjoy life apart from work and die eventually. Some individuals are of the opinion that since the average age of people has increased and they tend to live for a long duration the retirement age
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Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work and should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When people are 60 years old, they should not continue working. Instead, they should take retirement. I will partly agree with this view.
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Topic: Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that competition is a normal phenomenon for survival. A few people believe that males tend to compete more easily than females. This essay will explain why I strongly hold a contrary opinion.
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It is widely believed that people's ability to learn new things decreases with age and that companies should actively recruit younger employees who have great potential to learn. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people beleive that as work force get older, their potential of learning declines, therefore employers should actively recruit youngesters for the company, whereas others determine that older individuals are necces
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music has always been a key distinguisher of culture but many believe that it can also bridge cultural gaps and differences in age. Though I think some people overstate the impact of music leveling the differences betwee
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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Language is a very important aspect of being human , as not every living thing has the luxury of a spoken language . I strongly disagree with this no-tion of replacing languages to an extent where they are forgotten to
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Some people think that the money spent in developing technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree?

A section of the society opines that capital invested in inventing technology for the sake of space research is not appropriate, and there are myriad other meritorious options to utilize this financial resource. I entire
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Question- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days, people are listening to not only local but also international musics, therefore, it is often believed that music can make all people together regardless of culture and age. Personally, I think it is not feasi
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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agre

Fees for higher education are expensive and not affordable for everyone so according to some university should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree that university education ought
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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present, celebrities are well-known because of the image of glamour and fortune associated with them, not because of their accomplishments, so according to some, this sets a bad paradigm to young people. In my opinion
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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fast food will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Morbid obesity is a growing concern in many western countries. Several solutions, inclding raising the price of unhealthy foods have been proposed over the last decade in order to fight this pandemic. Although it is a go
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exam

Music introduces various cultures, where people from different ages unit and in my opinion, music is a great way for individuals to learn about new customs and societies.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that, music is consider a positive method to connect people of different cultures and ages. This essay agrees with this statement, and it will first discuss the effects of the music between one culture to an
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Some people think that music is a good way to bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Listening music of various genres is been an order of the day for every age group people. It is often debatable whether melodies are tge best way to built remarkable relations with others or it is just a modus operandi f
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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their acheivements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People in the public eye are and will always be an inspiration for youngers. However, the current stardom of most of them relys on their glamour and whealth rather than on their talent. For this reason, it is argued that
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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fast foods will solve the problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The problem of an increasing number of people suffering from obesity is of concern for the government and citizens. Some suggest increasing the price of fattening foods in order to address the problem. As for me, I belie
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