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Band 5.5

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam,
This
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regards
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 to the faulty
credit
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card
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statement
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 that I received
your
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from your
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 bank today. My name is Sunaina Khanna and I have been using
hdfc
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credit
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card
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 services
from
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past
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 1 year.My
credit
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card
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id
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 is "sunaina.khanna" and
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credit
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my credit
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card
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 number is CNFPK000007878.
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 my contact details are mentioned in the portal,
but
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 I would still like to mention my telephone number
incase
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 needed.It is 7878990033. The
statement
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 that I received is completely faulty and it has put me
in
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 a lot of stress.The
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 mentions that I have purchased a diamond ring worth Rs. 1 lakh and a
rolex
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Rolex
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 watch worth Rs. 2
lakhs
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lakh
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, and the bill mentioned on
this
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statement
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 is 3,15,000 INR. I can confirm
you
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that I have only spent 15000 rs.
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 month through the
credit
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card
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 and I am completely shocked by the rest of the purchases mentioned in the
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. I would like you to look into the matter and check if it is a fraud or a mistake from the bank's end.I want the bank to send me the correct
credit
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card
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statement
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 for
this
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 month and
releave
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release
relieve
 me from
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 irrelevant stress. I am expecting an immediate response and a very quick resolution to
this
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 issue. Thanks and Regards, Sunaina Khanna
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coherence cohesion
The statement could include a clear link between each paragraph and the following paragraph.
task achievement
The context could be introduced in a more indirect tone, being polite and showing some restrain in the language used.
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