The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.

The given two table data graphs compare information about

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the employement

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employement

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employment

of

freedonia

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Freedonia

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by

genders

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gender

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in six sectors between 1975 and 1995. A glance at the graph reveals that

women

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women's

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manpower were growth for 20 years,

while

numbers

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the numbers

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of male

employerer

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employer

employees

were fall significantly in 1995. It is clear from the data,

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of workers

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in

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manufacturing and public sector

cover

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covers

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their

number

of

employess

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employees

.

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,

communication

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the communication

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and wholesale sectors

shown

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showed

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a diffrent

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diffrent

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different

number

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numbers

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which was

tendency

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a tendency

the tendency

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to

growth

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grow

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by

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with

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females. Both of them

were reach

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reached

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a point of over 500 and 800.

Althought

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Although

, Finance and

bankin

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banking

sector growth up

dramaticlly

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dramatically

by

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in

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women in 1995, it

was not reach

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did not reach

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number

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a number

the number

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of males.

Public

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The public

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sector was

a

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apply

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tiny among

of

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apply

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them, but the graph

illustrate

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illustrates

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a

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domination of males. In conclusion, female

worker

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workers

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joined

whole

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the whole

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of

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apply

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sectors,

due to

seen

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see

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in work life and they dominate opposite gender.