In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Nowadays, adolescents are

inclining

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inclined

to spend the majority of

time

with their friends rather than their family members. Not only will

this

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essay, discuss

the reasons for

such

trend to

occur but

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occur, but

it will

also

explain my reasons why I believe parents should forcibly make their children spend more

time

at home. The technological era and the fast paced world that people

live

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are living

in these days have made the gap between generations to grow large. To illustrate, youngsters usually opt to live in the virtual world of social media,

such

as Facebook, and electronic games, in which, they can find peers with mutual interests that they may not find with their family members.

In addition

, most of millennial parents work for extended hours in order to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

the needs of their families;

therefore

, they do not get free

time

to integrate themselves in their children’s lives. If the gap between fosters and children is large, the chances of children’s alienation will increase between them. In my perspective, being of a dire impact on all family members, parents ought to oblige the children to devote more

time

for family in order to bridge the mentioned gap.

Firstly

, children are more susceptible

for

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to

negative social

media peer

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media, peer

pressure if they spend most of their

time

on the Internet without proper supervision, which may lead to deviation in their morals, as per several studies by human development specialists. Another impact, many hours staying away from parents can cause bonds between family members to weaken, and

this

may breed crime among children due to lack of guidance. To conclude, the widespread trend of

children sparing

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children, sparing

more

time

with friends might be attributable to the distant in interests and lack of

time

, and I opine that forcing children to spend more

time

with their families is of utmost importance.