You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam , I am writing to you
this
letter to express my upset about a message that I have received on my mobile phone from CIB bank ; it contains
invoice
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an invoice
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of
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for
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some devices I did not buy
them
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apply
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at all. I am Heba
MAhmoud
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Mahmoud
. I am working as a teacher in an international school. I have a bank count in the Commercial International Bank ,it,
number
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the number
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is 78968767 which I get my monthly salary through it. it is
also
a visa card. Yesterday morning, while I was doing some
staff
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stuff
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at school, I have received a message that contains a list of devices, which are
LCD
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an LCD
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, an oven and a fridge; their cost is really expensive ; it is about 10,000 pounds. I feel astonished because I actually did not buy
an
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thing from Hyper Market at the dated time in the message. I really want an explanation for
this
situation; who can use my credit card account to buy things.
Moreover
, I want my money back as soon as possible. I am waiting to look forward
from
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you soon.
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Yours
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Your
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faithfully, Heba Mahmoud
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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