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You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express: why you went to the shop/office how the employees behaved to offend you what you expect the company to do

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I am writing
this
 letter to complain about a service I had received a week ago i.e, August 15th,2019. It was really
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 weird situation I have ever experienced. As I saw the advertisement regarding the sales your shop was offering on that day I went to enquire about big
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 televisions. I wanted to buy one of the
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 as I was looking for the sale to come up from a couple of days. As soon as I entered the showroom, one of your
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 came to help me. Later, I selected a product to buy,
therefore
 I was asking about the probable instalment payment options.
However
, another employee came and took him away. I waited for 40 minutes,
thus
 went to management, none of your workers cared about me. Poor service offered, unprofessional behaviour and I am really unhappy about it. I regret to have been in your shop. I am hoping the management/ owner to give rules and regulations to follow with the customers. And never forget ‘Customer is King’ in every business. Make all the employees maintain some dignity towards their customers so that no one gets offended like me. Yours faithfully,
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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