You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am writing

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letter in reference to inquire about the

last

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month's statement for my credit

card

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. Let me explain in detail. My name is Saad Mubarak and I am currently holding a platinum credit

card

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no 34578IXF with your bank. The

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provides me with a monthly limit of USD 5000 on purchases

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it provides me with a net discount of 10 per cent on grocery shopping.

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I have thoroughly enjoyed the premium services provided by your bank

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last

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month I was surprised to see my e-statement. The reason being it showed the purchase of some expensive items made through my credit

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. To elucidate I did not make any purchase through my

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, I have found multiple discrepancies on the monthly statement which I have explained to your customer care representatives.

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, I would request you to look into

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matter immediately and provide an immediate resolution as I have not been given any solution till now despite speaking multiple times with your customer care executives.

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, I would

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request you to send me the correct monthly statement. looking forward to your immediate response and resolution Yours sincerely saad

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

197 words

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The Greeting

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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