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You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: – Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired – Ms in computer science, – Your energy and enthusiasm for the job – Your past experience in a similar position.

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My name is Ishan Saverdekar, a senior Web developer. I would like to apply for the job
positon
the particular portion of space occupied by something
position
positions
posting
 at Apple’s
Headoffice
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Head Office
 location mentioned in yesterday’s newspaper article.
To begin
with my
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with, my
 education, I have earned two Masters degrees in Computer science field with
highest GPA score
Suggestion
the highest GPA score
highest GPA scores
.
Moreover
, I have completed certified courses in different web technologies
such
 as Javascript, NodeJS, HTML5, CSS3, and Advance JAVA which are core requirements in work. I have used above subjective knowledge in my entire
career which
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career, which
 is more than 5 years. One of the key
requirement
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requirements
 mentioned in
job description
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the job description
a job description
 is to have knowledge of GPS data integration with web application because of why I found
my self
reflexive form of "me"
myself
 suitable for the position.
In other words
, I have worked on the same technology for MNC companies
such
 as Intel and Qualcom. To conclude
my self
reflexive form of "me"
myself
, I am a flexible and hard working person who is curious about new technology. I can work not only on flexible time to attend client from another country, But I
also
 can attend long shift if there is any emergency in the project work. I have attached my updated resume with
this
 letter and I look forward to your quick positive reply.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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