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Band 5

Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) What part of the service would you like to change?

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to bring your attention
regarding
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 the changes in the local
bus
 services which created discomfort for the people and request you to make us comfortable. Introducing myself, I am residing in Porwal street
since
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for
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 five years and I have been using your
bus
 services to reach
office
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the office
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 daily. Recently, I have noticed few service changes, especially the timings of the
buses
. The
buses
 I have been travelling are regular
on time
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 till
few
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 days back.
However
, I have observed that the timings are changed from office hours 9:00 A.M to 9:30 A.M and I could not reach the office in the specified time. Even the number of
buses
 to Kothrud area
also
 reduced. I do not have a bike and even cannot afford.
Hence
, relying on your
bus
 services.
Also
 the
bus
 stop has been changed and it is a congested area and people feel difficulty to board the
buses
. Kindly see that every change made is feasible to public.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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