The illustration enumerates the steps in witch power is produced in the Hydroelectric power station from Flow of water in daytime and pumps the water up the dam in nighttime to iterate this process in the next day.

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The illustration enumerates the steps in which power is produced at the Hydroelectric power station from Flow of
water
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in daytime and pumps the
water
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up the
dam
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in the nighttime to iterate
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process
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in the
next
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day. The daily
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starts from opening the bottom of the
dam
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to release the
water
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downward through the generator turbines. Fast rolling wings create electricity, which is led through the power lines to the national grid.
Water
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will be settled in the low-level reservoir,
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at the end of the production. But the nighttime
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is exactly backward compared to the daytime with some electricity consumption
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.
Water
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is pumped up the
dam
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with the same generator, but turning inverse.
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reserves behind the
dam
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which is closed at nights to fill up the
dam
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. With more coming through the river merge with the recycled, there will be enough high-level
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in the
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morning
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in
the production
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.

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