The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The charts
illustrates
the Change the verb form
illustrate
percentage wise
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percentage-wise
ratings
of the parkway Use synonyms
hotel
customer service based on Use synonyms
a
same questionnaire that was asked Correct article usage
the
to
100 different guests who visited the Change preposition
of
hotel
in the years 2005 and 2010.
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Linking Words
OverAll
from the two Correct your spelling
Overall
charts
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,charts
it is clear that
parkway Linking Words
Hotel
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have
taken Correct subject-verb agreement
has
customers
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customers'
customer's
ratings
into account and
worked towards striving Use synonyms
excellence
which in turn improved its Change preposition
for excellence
customers
service Change to a genitive case
customer's
customers'
alot
in the duration of 5 years.
In 2010,Correct your spelling
a lot
excellent
rating was the least Add an article
the excellent
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ratings
in the chart Fix the agreement mistake
rating
which
marked Correct pronoun usage
apply
at
5% but it remarkably
increased to 28% which is Change preposition
apply
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second
highest rating in 2015.Add an article
the second
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similarly
only 14% Add a comma
,similarly
guests
felt that Change preposition
of guests
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hotel's
customer service was good which is the Correct article usage
the hotel's
second
least segment during Linking Words
start
of the period Add an article
the start
where as
28% Correct your spelling
whereas
visitors
gave Change preposition
of visitors
good
rating Correct article usage
a good
in
the end of the period and it is the highest rating of the year.
in contrary to good and excellent Change the preposition
at
ratings
,Use synonyms
satisfactory
rating Add an article
a satisfactory
the satisfactory
that
peaks up to 45% and Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
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its
highest
rating in 2005 Add an article
the highest
shown
a dramatical decrease to 17% in Wrong verb form
showed
duration
of 5 years.in the same Correct article usage
a duration
way
poor and very poor Add a comma
,way
ratings
were marked at 21% and 15% during the 1st year Use synonyms
fallen
to 12% and 4% during Wrong verb form
falling
end
of the period.Add an article
the end
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