The line graph below gives the information about the rates of unemployment between 1991 and 2005 in three different countries.The table shows the percentage of men and women in the workforce in three countries.
The line graph shows data about
the
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unemployment
over period
of 14 years , from 1991 and 2005 in three respective countries,Add an article
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while
the table illustrates the proportion of male and female employees in three respective countries.
It is clear that
unemployment
rates in Spain decreased dramatically while
in Germany
there were mild fluctuations.In contrast
,in Italy
it increased considerably.
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unemployment
rate was around 14 Correct article usage
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Germany
and Italy were
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unemployment
in Spain declined enormously. In Germany
it fluctuated and remained steady,Add a comma
,Germany
whereas
in Italy there was a significant increase of 8 percent
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unemployment
rates from 4 to 12 percent
, between 1991 and 2005.
By far the highest rate of employment for males was in Italy with 77.1 Change the spelling
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percent
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whereas
for females in Germany
the percentage of employees was 54.4 Add a comma
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percent
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