The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The pie charts demonstrate the different sources in terms of producing
energy
in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Coal, gas and petrol were the biggest
source
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to produce
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energy
in both years,
while
nuclear and others accounted for the least amount of
energy
.
However
, in all types of
energy
production
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there was minimal change over the
10 year
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period. In 1995, 29.80% of
energy
was
being
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produced from coal,
while
in 2005, it accounted for 30.93%, which was the largest
energy
production source of France in both years. On the other side, by producing 29.63% and 30.30% in 1995 and 2005, respectively, gas secured the
second
position to produce
energy
. Meanwhile, Petro accounted for 29.70% in 1995, and
this
proportion dropped to 19.55% in 2005. Again, nuclear and other sources represented 6.40% and 4.90% of the total
energy
production in 1995,
while
These figures were almost double in 2005, 10.10% and 9.10%, respectively.

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