The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The pie charts demonstrate the different sources in terms of producing
energy
in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, it is clear that
Coal, gas and petrol were the biggest source
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producing
energy
in both years, while
nuclear and others accounted for the least amount of energy
. However
, in all types of energy
production
there was minimal change over the Add a comma
,production
10 year
period.
In 1995, 29.80% of Add a hyphen
10-year
energy
was being
produced from coal, Unnecessary verb
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while
in 2005, it accounted for 30.93%, which was the largest energy
production source of France in both years. On the other side, by producing 29.63% and 30.30% in 1995 and 2005, respectively, gas secured the second
position to produce energy
. Meanwhile, Petro accounted for 29.70% in 1995, and this
proportion dropped to 19.55% in 2005.
Again, nuclear and other sources represented 6.40% and 4.90% of the total energy
production in 1995, while
These figures were almost double in 2005, 10.10% and 9.10%, respectively.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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