The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The charts illustrate the proportion of
water
usage in
percentange
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percentage
of three different methods, namely Industrial
use
, Agricultural
use
and Domestic
use
in
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6 continents of the world.
Overall
, it is clear to see that Central Asia has by far the highest
water
usage in Agriculture,
while
South
America
and
Europe
have the highest in domestic and Industrial
use
respectively. As the charts show, North and South
America
and
Europe
have more Domestic
use
compared to other areas, with a value of 13% and 19% for North
America
and South
America
respectively and 15% for
Europe
.
Therefore
, North
America
and
Europe
have more
water
for
industrail
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industrial
use
, with a percentage of almost
a
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half for North
America
, and 53% for
Europe
.
By contrast
, the
water
usages in
African
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the African
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and Asian continents are almost the same, with a percentage of roughly 80-88% for all of them.
Furthermore
, South
America
has
a more balanced values
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than any continent, with its Industrial and Agricultural
use
of 10 and 71% respectively.
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