The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010.

The chart illustrates the number of British
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students
student
at one university in England who were capable to speak different languages with English in 2000 and 2010.
Firstly
, The Number of students who were able to speak no other
language
and friends were 20% and 15% in 2000, but in the
year
2010 decrease of 10% and 10%.
However
, the
student
who speaks German
language
is same in both
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years
year
which is 10%.
Although
, The
student
who has been able to speak Spanish, other languages and to other languages were 30%, 15% and 10% in 2000, by the
year
2010 all the three languages percentage increased by 5%. In conclusion, only the number of
student
who is speaking, German
language
were same in both
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years, but
years but
year but
other
language
shows the trend of upward and downward.

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