The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010.
The chart illustrates the number of British
student
at one university in England who were capable to speak different Change to a plural noun
students
languages
with
English in 2000 and 2010.
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in
Firstly
, The Number of students who were able to speak no other language
and friends were
20% and 15% in 2000, but in the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
year
2010 decrease
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decreased
of
10% and 10%. Change preposition
by
However
, the student
who speaks German
Change the article
the German
language
is same
in both Correct article usage
the same
year
which is 10%. Change to a plural noun
years
Although
, The student
who has been able to speak Spanish, other languages
and to
other Change preposition
apply
languages
were 30%, 15% and 10% in 2000, by the year
2010 all the three languages
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languages'
percentage
increased by 5%.
In conclusion, only the number of Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
student
who is speaking, German language
were same
in both Correct article usage
the same
year
but other
Correct article usage
the other
language
shows the
trend of upward and downward.Correct article usage
a
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