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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010.
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The chart illustrates the number of British
student
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students
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 at one university in England who were capable to speak different
languages
with
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in
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 English in 2000 and 2010.
Firstly
, The Number of students who were able to speak no other
language
 and friends
were
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was
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 20% and 15% in 2000, but in the
year
 2010
decrease
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decreased
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of
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by
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 10% and 10%.
However
, the
student
 who speaks
German
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language
 is
same
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the same
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 in both
year
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years
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 which is 10%.
Although
, The
student
 who has been able to speak Spanish, other
languages
 and
to
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apply
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other
languages
 were 30%, 15% and 10% in 2000, by the
year
 2010 all the three
languages
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languages'
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percentage
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 increased by 5%. In conclusion, only the number of
student
 who is speaking, German
language
 were
same
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the same
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 in both
year
 but
other
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the other
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language
 shows
the
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a
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 trend of upward and downward.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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