You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter. You should write at least 150 words.

The manager, I wanted to tell you that I ordered the cheque book
last
Wednesday from your bank through your website but till
know
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now
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I did not
received
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receive
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any cheque from the bank till now after one week. I am writing
this
letter to convey
you
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to you
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that
this
is very bad service from your
bank side
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bankside
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because of that I am very unhappy with your services and how
much
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apply
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long
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longer
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I have to wait for my cheque book and please tell
what
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me what
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the necessary action you will take over
this
matter so that any other customer should not be unhappy with
this
type of work. Thanking you, Name-ABC

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