The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
illutrates
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illustrates
illustrate
the percentage of
water
used for industrial, agricultural , and domestic
use
.
Overall
, in
asia
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Asia
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water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes.
On the other hand
, in North America and
Europe
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,Europe
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water
is mainly used for industry. As presented in the graph North America uses
highest
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the highest
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percentage of
water
in
industry
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the industry
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which is
at
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48
percent
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. Followed by, agricultural used and
doemstic
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domestic
used which
areat
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are at
are
39 and 13
percent
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,respectively.
Similarly
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in
Europe
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53
percent
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per cent
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of
water
isused
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is used
for industry and 32
percent
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per cent
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is uses
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is used
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for
agricultur
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agriculture
.
Lastly
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only 15
percent
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is domestic
use
. In south America
highest
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the highest
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perfcentage
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percentage
of
water
is
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is used
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use
for agricultural
purpose
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purposes
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followed by domestic
use
and industrial
use
which is
at
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apply
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19 and 10
percent
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per cent
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,respectively
..
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.
...
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In
Africa
Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
Central
Asia
has the highest
use
of
water
for agriculture which is at 88
percent
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per cent
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followed by
Africa
and South East
Asia
which
areat
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are at
are
84 and 81
percent
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per cent
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,respectively. In these three
countries
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,countries
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South East
Asia
has the highest
used
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use
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of
water
for industrial
use
which is at 12
percent
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per cent
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followed by
Africa
and Central
asia
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Asia
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which is at seven and five
percent
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per cent
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, respectively.
Further more
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Furthermore
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Africa
has the highest
used
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use
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of
water
for domestic
use
followed by central
asia
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Asia
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and South East
Asia
which
use
the same amount of
water
which is at seven
percent
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per cent
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, asia, percent, africa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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