The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.
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priority versus Change noun form
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women
The table illustrates a comparison between gender Use synonyms
activities
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spending
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and spending
hours
which appear sometimes slightly or completely different depending on Use synonyms
type
of activity and gender.
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the type
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and differences have Correct your spelling
gaps
clear
impact on Add an article
a clear
type
and numbers of Correct article usage
the type
hours
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activities
. As Change preposition
of activities
it
clear for the first group Correct your spelling
is
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, Use synonyms
women
spend slightly higher Use synonyms
hours
than Use synonyms
men
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in
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apply
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slightly
higher percentage than Correct article usage
a slightly
men
in resting and personal Use synonyms
care
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as well
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apply
hours
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spending
on hobbies and games, and Wrong verb form
spent
sports man
have higher percentages than Correct your spelling
sportsman
woman
, (37 and ,13) and( ,23 , 7 )severally.
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women
higher
position in Add an article
a higher
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women
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records
man
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give more Use synonyms
care
about all leisure than Use synonyms
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a woman
the woman
woman
(5, 25)( , 4, 53 ) one by one .
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care
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men
achieve upper rates in employment and study (3,45) ,and (2,26) for Use synonyms
woman
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women
in addition
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travel , 1,32 to 1,22 Change preposition
to
while
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women
had the highest rate in housework 3 to 1,4 and children Use synonyms
care
is doubled than man ,32 to ,15 individually .
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men
give superior priority to work , ease and relaxation ,and travel Use synonyms
in contrast
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women
who give senior / greater attention to house Use synonyms
affair
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