Nowadays many job seekers are finding jobs that force them to move for from their family and friends. Is it a positive or a negative trend? What can be done about it?

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with, a lot of people believe they can earn higher incomes by working overseas.

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, living standards and economic conditions for their families will improve, especially for people who migrate to developed countries from

third

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world countries. There are,

by comparison

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, other negative aspects that people should remember. The family members have a chance of a

cultural

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culture

shock, because there could be certain rituals and practices that do not suit them. To overcome

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problem, families should learn

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the common language

a common language

about the land to which they are going. It will minimize the "cultural shock" and help avoid unpleasant accidents. Family members should

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have an idea about the country's laws and rules prior to travel.

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should avoid law-related issues. Photography of government buildings or monuments,

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, is a criminal offence in some countries.

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, living far away from your loved ones could cause depression in some people. It takes time to get to know an area and make friends, particularly at the start, so people begin to feel lonely.

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, if the person is older, beginning a relationship becomes much harder, because everyone else has already established their social circles. In

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case,

however

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, employers do play an important role. Since businesses recruit people from

abroad they

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abroad, they

can plan for a smoother transition. Employers,

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, may require monthly offs for workers so they could visit families, at least for the

first

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months.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

240 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people think governments should make university education free, but others think students should pay fees by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

n many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?