Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA

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the average percentages of 3 types of nutrients consumed at breakfast, lunch
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dinner and
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snack times.Smaller part of nutrients absorbed at breakfast time that's 14
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and 16
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of saturated fat and likely added
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with 21
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saturated fat and surprisingly 42
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like snacks. Meanwhile
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a little bit larger portion nutrients consumed at lunch than at breakfast time
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so 29
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sodium
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, 26
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saturated fat
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19
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added
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a lot of nutrients eaten at dinner that's 43
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sodium
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37
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fats
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and 23
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